7 May 2018

Guest post by James Vella-Bardon, Author of The Sheriff's Catch (The Sassana Stone Pentalogy)


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1588. Abel de Santiago has deserted the army and all but avenged his murdered wife, when he is captured and sold as a galley slave. As the Spanish Armada sails for England, there can be few souls on board more reluctant than him.

THE SPARK

Inspiration, it’s a curious thing. I’m often asked what inspired me to lock myself away for nine years and complete a five-novel series set in Tudor (well, almost) Ireland, called The Sassana Stone Pentalogy. I can still remember the day I stepped into the now defunct Bridgepoint Books, a second-hand bookstore at the Bridgepoint Shopping Centre in the absolutely beautiful Sydney suburb of Mosman.

I was a recently landed immigrant back in ’08, having moved to Sydney from Malta, and becoming increasingly absorbed by the sixteenth century, which the French call ‘Le Grand Siècle’, the great century. These were the days when Hilary Mantel’s Wolf Hall had hit the literary world like a sledgehammer. I was trying to read everything about the period that I could lay my hands on, when in the corner of my eye I noticed a curious little book called Ireland: The Graveyard Of The Spanish Armada by Irish journalist T.P. Kilfeather.

Ireland? Spanish Armada? This was news to me. What on earth did Ireland have to do with the Spanish Armada? I opened up the curious little book, and was taken aback to discover that in 1588, the ships of the Spanish Armada chose to round Scotland and Ireland to head back home, in order to avoid being cut to pieces by Dutch pirates who were allied to Queen Elizabeth I of England. Terrible storms plagued the Armada on what was in truth a familiar and well-worn homeward tack, so that many of its ships were wrecked upon the coasts of Scotland and Ireland.

The western Irish coast was increasingly falling under the sway of the English crown back then. Which is why the Spanish Commanders expressly prohibited Armada crew members from attempting landings upon the Irish coast, despite the fact that they were plagued by storms, heavily leaking ships, thirst, hunger and disease, amongst others. But you don’t have much of a choice when you’re shipwrecked upon the Irish coast by a squall, do you? Yet not in vain did the Spanish Commanders warn against any landings in Ireland, for no sooner did the first Armada castaways land upon the beaches, that a chilling order was instantly issued to all English garrisons by Queen Elizabeth I’s Viceroy in Dublin: 

“Execute all Spaniards, of what quality soever. Torture may be used.” 

Upon receiving the order, scores of troopers were immediately despatched towards the beaches, to slay or capture all of the shipwrecked Spaniards who came into their power. And yet, I found myself also reading the accounts of Spanish survivors in Kilfeather’s book. Survivors? How could anyone have survived such treacherous odds, when the very fact that you were an Armada castaway meant you were a dead man walking?

I was near breathless as I devoured the pages which I held in my hands, which were almost shaking as I read through the hair-raising and horrifying accounts of strangers in a strange land, hunted like wild beasts by a merciless enemy. This stuff was almost as good as Mel Gibson’s epic drama ‘Apocalypto’, not to mention Charriere’s ‘Papillon’! Hold on - this was even better! Why don’t more authors write thrillers like this? And how curious was it that the Spaniards, having long persecuted the length and breath of the known world, suddenly found themselves persecuted in turn? As I read on and on, I felt like I was on some crazy rollercoaster ride, except that the events recounted were based on real human history! 

The questions instantly resounded through my head: how was it that this story had never been dramatized before? Why had I never heard of this incredible episode? And how amazing was it, that the Armada landings caused a dramatic and violent juncture between the Spanish counter-reformists, English reformists and the late medieval Irish? And that’s not even mentioning the many militias full of Scottish gallowglasses!

I knew then, that I had finally discovered my inspiration. What Hollywood actor Sylvester Stallone called ‘the spark’, in his case the fight between Chuck Wepner and Muhammed Ali, which led him to pen Rocky. After reading Kilfeather’s book from cover to cover, I then bought it for five bucks and headed straight to my apartment in Mosman. I only left it to buy groceries, and a week later I had punched out the first manuscript which I called The Sassana Stone.

At the prompting of an established UK literary agent, I decided to further research the period of my novel, to ensure that it was based on fulsome and exhaustive historical research. I had already read scores of books on the period, and practically lived at the Fisher Library of The University of Sydney for the whole of 2011, during which I was increasingly hooked to the sources I found. Nothing had prepared me for the sheer complexity of the Gaelic civilsiation in Ireland, which the Tudor Sassenachs or ‘New English’ were seeking to subdue. A civilisation in which women still had most rights of men, and in which divorce was also permitted, despite the encroaching influence of Roman Catholicism. Which is not to mention the incredibly sophisticated bodies of law and the ancient bardic tradition. And that’s not even getting into practices like fostering, amongst others, which GRR Martin famously uses in his world of Westeros. How had no one built an epic literary arc around these incredible happenings and fantastic civilisation?

While typing away late at night I would bang the table countless times, and reprimand myself: ‘that’s enough research James!’ Yet the sixteenth century Gaelic world was both enchanting and mesmerising, and I knew that I had to plough on, no matter how exhausted I felt at the end of a day’s commitments, to extract as much information as I could to bring this story to life. I also made it to the western coast of Ireland in October of 2012, an unforgettable fieldwork trip (they have great weather there in October) in which I visited all of the breathtaking and incredible sights which feature in my story.

All of which meant nine years of rewriting and research (I also had a dayjob, got married and had two babies during this time), which grew my manuscript from 80,000 words to over 450,000 words. I absolutely loved every single minute of it, and I ended up with a five-novel series, the first of which is called ‘The Sheriff’s Catch’ and was published last month by award-winning publisher Unbound. The novel was an instant hit on Unbound’s platform, with presales worth 4000 GBP secured in its opening week! It was subsequently serialised on international digital book club The Pigeonhole, used by Ken Follett to promote ‘A Column Of Fire’. The reviews which followed have been quite simply sensational, and can be read on both Goodreads and Amazon. 

I am proud to have dedicated nearly a decade of my life to telling this amazing story, and I hope to transport readers into the breathtaking events preceding and following the Spanish Armada landings. One literary critic has praised ‘The Sheriff’s Catch’ as ‘a fine debut’ and ‘a blockbuster with depth’. Another enthusiastically wrote to me to say that he hadn’t picked up such an ‘unputdownable’ novel since he’d read ‘The Da Vinci Code’.  Much as I am flattered by these descriptions I also believe that they’re apt, and that my debut is a curious and powerfully written yarn that will fling readers into an endless rollercoaster ride of incredible emotions, with unforgettable characters, cliff-hangers and narrow escapes aplenty. Strap on your seat belts before giving the first chapter a read, and get ready for a great deal of fun while you learn heaps without even realising it!

James Vella-Bardon


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About the Author

James Vella-Bardon was born and raised in Malta, an island nation steeped in the millennia of history. As a boy he often caught a rickety old bus to the capital of Valletta, where he would hover around the English bookshops to check out the latest titles in fiction. Growing up he was an avid reader and a relentless day-dreamer, with his standout subject at school being English composition. He also won a couple of national essay competitions. Although he spent seven years studying and obtaining a doctor of laws degree, this did not cure him of his urge to write stories. So after emigrating to Sydney in 2007 he resolved to have a proper stab at writing his first novel. The result of this decision is an epic, sprawling five-part historical fiction series called The Sassana Stone Pentalogy. It is the product of nine years of intense rewriting and research, and tells the story of a Spanish Armada survivor who is shipwrecked in Ireland. Find out more at www.jamesvellabardon.com and find him on Facebook Twitter @jamesvbardon

6 May 2018

Special Guest Interview with Author Daralyse Lyons


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Laura Cutty is in love with a murderer.  She knew when she married him that Thomas Cutty was a killer.  Twelve years of marriage and two beautiful babies later, and Laura and Thomas have learned to love the life they built together – a life that depends on Laura never asking the question: Who did Thomas kill last night?

I'm pleased to welcome prolific author Daralyse Lyons to The Writing Desk today:

Tell us about your latest book

My latest book, The Murderer's Wife, is a story about a loving, mutually-supportive marriage. In fact, the relationship has only one problem: The husband is a murderer.

What is your preferred writing routine?

Because I'm not a night person, I try to write in the morning or early afternoon. And I write every day. I think it's important to see writing as a discipline. Yes, it is great to feel inspired, but it's not a prerequisite for putting pen to page.

What advice do you have for aspiring writers?

I don't know that I believe in "aspiring" writers. I think, if you write, then you're a writer. My suggestion would be to just start writing. There's a wonderful exercise in Julia Cameron's The Artist's Way that advises writing each and every day without judgment, censorship, or an eye toward a specific "goal." I highly recommend that new writers start off forming a habit, then get more specific with writing goals and dreams after building a sense of creative routine.

What have you found to be the best way to raise awareness of your books?

I believe in really connecting with my readers. When a reader reads and enjoys one of my books, he or she will read another and tell a friend. I'm a huge fan of authentic engagement and a two-way reader-writer relationship.

What was the hardest scene you remember writing?

Oh gosh. For me, the challenge isn't in the writing. It's in the editing. I think my "hardest" scenes were some of the killings. Trying to figure out how much to describe and how much to leave to the imagination. I find it difficult to determine what should stay and what should go. I killed quite a lot of darlings.

What are you planning to write next?

I'm currently working on a memoir and it is fun, cathartic, painful, and exhausting. It's probably the hardest thing I've ever written.

Daralyse Lyons
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About the Author

In the second grade, Dara (or “Daralyse Lyons” as her angry teacher called her) was sent to the principal’s office for misbehaving. When she arrived, instead of going in to see the principal and accepting her punishment, Daralyse lied about having a stomach ache and needing to see the nurse. She’s been telling stories and putting on performances ever since. She wears many hats as an author, actress, yogi, and transformational coach/speaker, but the common thematic elements to all her endeavors is her love of stories and desire to help people find happiness. A summa cum laude graduate of New York University with a double-major in English Literature and Religious Studies and a minor in History, Daralyse brings intelligence, sensitivity, enthusiasm, creativity and business acumen to all of her endeavors. She lives in the quaint Mount Airy section of Philadelphia. Find out more at her website 
www.daralyselyons.com and find Daralyse on Facebook and Twitter @daralyselyons

5 May 2018

Poetry Spotlight: The Little Girl and the River and Other Poems, by Alessa Mark


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The Little Girl and the River and other poems is a refreshing take on human emotions – love, sorrow, happiness and much more. 

The collection of poems is a passionate portrayal of the vitality of love that supersedes loneliness, of hope and optimism in difficult times, of the power of dreams, and of how courage and the determined human spirit ultimately triumphs over the pervasive malice around.
The Little Girl and the River
 

The little girl sits by the riverside
Heavy her heart, her tears a tide
A shattered soul within, challenges her might
She budges a little, but chooses to fight
Hope is faint, no anchor to prod
Bruised and beaten, yet her dream is her god
An unknown strength nudges her spirit
A thorny path ahead, yet she cannot quit
Her past, she buries in a casket of gold
A few memories fond, the others she cannot hold
The river calm as it flows by
Seeks to embrace what her heart doesn’t defy
She finds her voice in the song of the river
How the waves persist despite the wind’s quiver
She sleeps in the elixir of joy for a while
As the river looks up and returns her smile…
The Little Girl and the River is also a beautiful ode to women power, fighting adversities with hope and courage, of their remarkable endurance and selfless devotion.

The poetry is inspiring and uplifting, in that it celebrates the power of the human spirit - of dreams and optimism and the ultimate victory of the resolute human soul over the vagaries of life.

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About the Author

Alessa Mark is an ebook author, poet and a freelance content writer. Her writings have appeared in local journals and blogs. She’s an MBA with a fervent passion towards writing from a very young age. Her poetry ebook 22 Poems on Love and Life! Memoirs and Reflection can be found on Amazon. Her hobbies include reading and writing short stories, traveling and cooking. Find out more at Alessa's website https://inspirationdailyforyou and find her on Twitter @Alessamark_1

4 May 2018

Book Review: Virgin to Victoria, by Trisha Hughes


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The Queen is dead. Long live the Queen follows on in time through Elizabeth's amazing life, the confusion of the Stuart dynasty, the devastation of a Civil War led by Oliver Cromwell and the turbulent and discordant Hanover dynasty with their 
intricate family squabbles.

There are many unanswered mysteries surrounding the life of Elizabeth I, the 'virgin' of the title of Trisha Hughes second book in the V 2 V series. I enjoyed the first book, Vikings to Virgin - The Hazards of Being King so was looking forward to this with high expectations.

I wasn't disappointed, as Trisha's lively and engaging style takes us on a grand tour of those who enjoyed wearing the crown from 1559 to 1838. Although I'd say I'm well informed about Elizabeth, I doubt I'm alone in being less knowledgeable about her successors, so this book is an accessible way to understand how our history was shaped over those very different eras.

This is history with an enjoyable irreverence. Queen Elizabeth 'threw a wobbler' when she heard her lover was secretly courting one of her ladies-in-waiting (Lettice Knollys). King James I (not handsome, not even close) is accused of fiddling with his codpiece, and 'no one had ever called Queen Anne glamourous. She had poor vision and was not very intelligent.'

The stories behind these monarchs are as strange as any you'll find in fiction, from Elizabeth's paranoia to King George III planting a juicy steak in the garden to see if it would grow. As Trisha Hughes says, 'these stories span hundreds of years of lust, betrayal, heroism, murder, cruelty and mysteries.'  What more could you ask for?

Tony Riches

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About the Author

Australian born Trisha Hughes began writing 18 years ago with her best-selling memoir ‘Daughters of Nazareth’. Trisha’s passion is history and she loves bringing it alive in a way that is easy to read and enjoy. Her hope is to inspire young readers and the young at heart to understand and enjoy stories and legends from the past. While living in Hong Kong, she writes for a local magazine and is involved with young writers. Find out more at Trisha’s website: www.trishahughesauthor.com and www.vikingstovirgin.com.  You can contact Trisha on her Facebook page, Trisha Hughes Author and on Twitter @TrishaHughes_


Disclosure: A review copy of this book was kindly provided by the publishers.  

3 May 2018

Guest Post by Nikki Brice ~ I’d Like to Thank My Editor… Tips For a Happy Relationship


I can’t think of anything more daunting for a new writer than handing over their manuscript to an editor for the first time. A manuscript isn’t just a document containing your story. It’s a whole raft of other things: it represents months, possibly years, of hard work; it embodies your hopes and dreams; and it’s your shop window.

When your editor returns your manuscript, you want to feel that the whole experience was uplifting and positive, that the editor was a creative advisor, a supportive force, a realistic but constructive voice. In other words, someone you’d like to thank! New writers often worry that this won’t be the case, that an editor will be unappreciative, overbearing, inflexible and distant.


So what can a new writer do to give themselves the best chance of having a happy working relationship with their editor? Here are a few thoughts.


Don’t Look For the Best Editor in the World


For one thing, that editor doesn’t exist. For another, if there were one best editor, imagine how long you’d have to wait! Instead, focus on finding the right editor for you, the editor who’s the best fit for your project and what you want to achieve.


Explore an editor’s website, LinkedIn profile, Twitter feed and so on. By all means check out their qualifications, experience, and professional memberships. Those things are important. But don’t ignore your instincts. We all form an impression as we read. Does this sound like someone you’d like to work with? If you get a good feeling, that’s a great starting point.


When you first contact an editor, tell them something about your project. You’d be amazed how many emails from authors amount to little more than, ‘I’m looking for someone to edit my book. It’s 75,000 words.’ I love to hear the detail! And there’s an advantage for you too – the level of enthusiasm with which the editor responds will give you a valuable indication of whether this editor is the right one for you. You don’t want to work with someone who has no interest in your writing.


Be Sure You Know What You’re Asking For … And What You’ll Be Getting


The Terminology Trap


Editors tend to provide various levels of service including:


  • Big-picture advice: does my plot work, are my characters believable?
  • Sentence-level work on the nitty-gritty, ensuring clarity, consistency and polishing the prose.
  • A final check before publication or submission.

The names of these services vary from editor to editor and author to author. The big-picture advice is variably referred to as a critique, a developmental edit, a substantive edit or a structural edit! Not all of these edits involve working on the manuscript itself. Some involve the editor writing a separate report. So, when you ask for a level of service make sure you are very clear about what you want the editor to do. Explore the editor’s website. A good editor will outline the services they offer and you can check what terminology they are using. This will make it easier to discuss what you want to happen with your manuscript.

Providing a Manuscript Sample

Once you’ve got a reasonably clear idea of the level of service you’d like, contact your editor. A good editor will ask for a sample, or possibly your entire manuscript, before committing to providing a particular level of service and confirming a fee. Don’t be put off by this. It’s important that your editor assesses your manuscript and advises you whether your chosen level of service is the right one.

Asking For an Editorial Sample

Most editors are happy to provide a short sample to show you what approach they’d take to your work. Take them up on the offer! It will give you a great insight into what the editor will do with your manuscript and whether it matches your expectations. In the sample, the editor will demonstrate the sorts of changes they would make and why. If you don’t like what they’ve done with your work, this is not the editor for you. Better for both parties to find that out at this stage!

So now I just sit back and wait for a perfect manuscript to come back, right?

Wrong.

You won’t get a perfect manuscript. Why not? Here’s why not:

The manuscript isn’t finished yet. The editor will have raised queries, pointed out inconsistencies, and suggested changes, often with an alternative option supplied. You will have to go through your manuscript carefully, accept those changes you like and reject the ones you don’t. In other words, the manuscript will still need input from you.

Editors are all human. It’s incredibly rare that I read a book, any book, where I don’t spot something that’s slipped through. If you find an editor who tells you that your work will be perfect when they’ve finished with it, I think you should be wary…

Fiction editing is subjective. In fiction, the rules of editing are much more fluid than in non-fiction. For example, if a character has a strong dialect, requiring grammar that’s at odds with standard English, a fiction editor wouldn’t correct the grammar to accord with the rules of standard English. Even in non-fiction, some editorial choices are stylistic ones rather than right-or-wrong ones. This subjectivity means that the manuscript cannot be perfect in the eyes of all readers. In fiction, the inflexible application of rules can alter the music of your prose. It can affect tone and pace. It can flatten characters and description. A good fiction editor will use their judgement to help you make the most of your manuscript.

So, to pave the way for a happy author–editor relationship, research potential editors, trust your instincts, ask for that sample, and find an editor whose style and approach is right for your work. Best of luck!

Nikki Brice

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About the Author

Nikki Brice runs the editorial business Splendid Stories and helps authors of both fiction and non-fiction to make their story splendid. Over the last five years she has immersed herself in everything from erotica to theology and prides herself on offering authors a positive and supportive service, tempered with realism. Find out more about Nikki at www.splendidstories.co.uk and find her on Twitter @SplendidStories.

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Disclosure:  I chose Nikki Brice as the editor of my last book and was impressed by her attention to detail and helpful advice. I have already commissioned Nikki to edit my current work in progress and am happy to recommend her.  

Tony Riches

Historical Fiction Blog Tour with Mary Sharratt, Author of Ecstasy


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In the glittering hotbed of turn-of-the-twentieth-century Vienna, one woman’s life would define and defy an era

Today I'm pleased to welcome author Mary Sharratt as part of her international blog tour:

Tell us about your latest book.

ECSTASY is drawn from the dramatic life of composer, muse, and life artist, Alma Schindler Mahler (1879 – 1964). Few twentieth century women have been surrounded by such as aura of scandal and notoriety. Her husbands and lovers included not only Mahler, but artist Gustav Klimt, architect and Bauhaus-founder Walter Gropius, artist Oskar Kokoschka, and poet and novelist Franz Werfel. Yet none of these men could truly claim to possess her because she was stubbornly her own woman to the last. 

Over fifty years after her death, she still elicits very strong reactions. Some people romanticize her as a muse to great men while others demonize her as a man-destroying monster. Laurel Thatcher Ulrich’s famous observation that well-behaved women seldom make history could have been written about Alma.

Alma Mahler c. 1902.
(Wikimedia Commons)

Although Alma was a composer in her own right, most commentators, including some of her biographers, completely gloss over this fact and instead focus quite narrowly on her sexuality and on how they believe she failed to be the perfect woman for the great men in her life. How dare she not be perfect!

But I wanted my fiction to explore who Alma really was as an individual—beyond her historical bad girl rep and beyond all the famous men she was involved with. Once I sat down and did the research, an entirely new picture of Alma emerged that completely undermined the femme fatale cliché. I read Alma’s early diaries compulsively, from cover to cover, and what I discovered in those secret pages was a soulful and talented young woman who had a rich inner life away from the male gaze. 

She devoured philosophy books and avant-garde literature. She was a most accomplished pianist—her teacher thought she was good enough to study at Vienna Conservatory, though her family didn’t support the idea. Besides, Alma didn’t want a career of public performance. Instead she yearned with her whole soul to be a composer, to write great symphonies and operas.

I hope my readers will be as moved by Alma’s story as I am. I think the time has truly come for a more nuanced and feminist appraisal of Alma’s life and work, and I hope ECSTASY challenges some of the commonly held misperceptions about her.

Gustav Mahler famously asked Alma to stop composing as a condition of their marriage. Deeply in love and in awe of his genius, she reluctantly agreed, even though this broke her heart. In this regard, her story is a starkly cautionary tale and also, alas, one that is all too relevant today. What do women still give up in the name of love? How much female potential never reaches fruition because of the demands of domesticity?

What Alma’s story reveals is how hard it was (and often still is) for women to stay true to their talent and creative ambition in a society that grooms women to be caretakers. Fortunately Alma does eventually triumph and take back her power.

What is your preferred writing routine?

I start in the mornings and write as long into the afternoon as I can. At a certain point my brain just clouds over and signals that it’s time to step away from the computer and do something physically active. Then I go to the nearby boarding stable to take care of my beautiful mare, Booshka. Shoveling horse manure everyday helps me keep our modern politics in perspective.

What advice do you have for aspiring writers?

Write every day and never give up. Keep a journal to develop your own unique voice that is different from any other writer’s voice or style. Read and admire your favorite authors, but don’t copy them. Do let them inspire you. Get support from other writers—join a truly supportive feedback group if you can. It has to be a support, not a fight club, obviously. Avoid hanging out with any group that belittles you or puts you down as a person in the name of “honest criticism.” 

And also support other writers. Read their books and attend their events. Get to know them, because when your book comes out, they can reach out to help you—maybe by writing a blurb or helping you place an essay or get reviewed. The writing world is so tightly knit and interwoven. You can’t afford to make enemies or burn bridges. Help build that supportive network that will in turn support you.

What have you found to be the best way to raise awareness of your books?

Nothing beats getting national press or having a major bookseller endorse you. ECSTASY is an Amazon Best Book of the Month, a Chicago Review of Books Book of the Month, and a New York Post Must Read. However, I could never have received any of this without my house publicist. You need a really good publicist to make these inroads.

Tell us something unexpected you discovered during your research.

Before I did the research for this book, I had no clue that the person who reinvented the New York Philharmonic for the Twentieth Century and became its president was a woman—Mary Seney Sheldon. Nor had I ever heard of ethnomusicologist, composer, and Native American rights activist, Natalie Curtis. Or sculptor Ilse Conrat who won international prizes and exhibited her work in the Vienna Secession Museum alongside the work of Klimt. 

I only came across these women by reading Alma’s diaries and her memoir. Ilse Conrat was her girlhood friend. The great injustice is that these high-achieving women were effectively written out of history. Alma, however, is remembered because she was so enmeshed in the lives of famous men. This is one of the most bitter ironies of women’s history—which women are remembered and which are forgotten.

What was the hardest scene you remember writing?

The scene in ECSTASY where Alma makes the heartbreaking choice to give up her own music to marry Gustav Mahler and become his muse.

What are you planning to write next?

Revelations, my new novel in progress, should be of special interest to fans of my 2012 novel, Illuminations: A Novel of Hildegard von Bingen. Here I return once more to the realm of the female medieval mystics. Revelations is the story of the intersecting lives of two spiritual women who changed history—earthy Margery Kempe, globetrotting pilgrim and mother of fourteen, and ethereal Julian of Norwich, sainted anchorite, theologian, and author of the first book in English by a woman. Imagine, if you will, a fifteenth century Eat, Pray, Love.

Mary Sharratt
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About the Author


MARY SHARRATT is an American writer who has lived in the Pendle region of Lancashire, England, for the past seven years. The author of the critically acclaimed novels Summit Avenue, The Real Minerva, and The Vanishing Point, Sharratt is also the co-editor of the subversive fiction anthology Bitch Lit, a celebration of female antiheroes, strong women who break all the rules. Her novels include Summit Avenue, The Real Minera, The Vanishing Point, The Daughters of Witching Hill, Illuminations, and The Dark Lady's Mask. For more information, please visit Mary Sharratt's website. You can also connect with her on Facebook, Twitter, and Goodreads.


Blog Tour Schedule

Tuesday, April 10 Review at Broken Teepee Wednesday, April 11 Feature at Passages to the Past Thursday, April 12 Review at Bookfever Review at Unabridged Chick Friday, April 13 Interview at Unabridged Chick Review at View From the Birdhouse Saturday, April 14 Review at Clarissa Reads it All Monday, April 16 Review at Cup of Sensibility Tuesday, April 17 Review at Based on a True Story Wednesday, April 18 Review at Oh, for the Hook of a Book! Thursday, April 19 Review at History From a Woman's Perspective Friday, April 20 Review at Linda's Book Obsession Sunday, April 22 Review at Carole Rae's Random Ramblings Monday, April 23 Review at A Bookaholic Swede Tuesday, April 24 Interview at Oh, for the Hook of a Book! Wednesday, April 25 Review at A Literary Vacation Thursday, April 26 Guest Post at A Bookish Affair Friday, April 27 Review at Ageless Pages Reviews Monday, April 30 Review at Caryn, the Book Whisperer Tuesday, May 1 Review at A Bookish Affair Thursday, May 3 Interview at The Writing Desk Monday, May 7 Review at What Cathy Read Next Wednesday, May 9 Review at Svetlana's Reads and Views Thursday, May 10 Review at Writing the Renaissance Friday, May 11 Interview at Writing the Renaissance Monday, May 14 Interview at Let Them Read Books Wednesday, May 16 Review at Jorie Loves a Story Thursday, May 17 Review at Nicole Evelina Friday, May 18 Interview at Nicole Evelina


Giveaway

During the Blog Tour we will be giving away a paperback copy of Ecstasy! To enter, please enter via the Gleam form below. Giveaway Rules – Giveaway ends at 11:59pm EST on May 18th. You must be 18 or older to enter. – Giveaway is open to US residents only. – Only one entry per household. – All giveaway entrants agree to be honest and not cheat the systems; any suspect of fraud is decided upon by blog/site owner and the sponsor, and entrants may be disqualified at our discretion. – Winner has 48 hours to claim prize or new winner is chosen. Ecstasy

1 May 2018

Guest Post by Author Alex Pearl: The trials and tribulations of making a book trailer


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There I was in the bar of the Holiday Inn in Welbeck Street with my old partner in crime, John Mac, when the subject turned to my children's book, Sleeping with the Blackbirds, which I'd written some little while back.

John has boundless energy and is always looking to get involved in interesting projects, and it was his suggestion that I try and market the thing. I should explain here that the book was originally written for my kids and published by Penpress to raise money for the homeless charity Centrepoint. 

But following the publication and the drafting of a commercial participation agreement that released me from any tax liabilities, my wife became seriously ill and the book was put on the back burner and received precious little in the way of marketing.

As it happens, I had already written a script to promote the book that had featured a letter written by the tale's protagonist, 11-year-old schoolboy, Roy Nuttersley that appears at the beginning of the book. As an ungainly young boy who's being tormented by bullies, Roy writes to Amnesty International (only he refers to the charity as Amnesia International) pleading for their help.

I shared my script with John who loved the intrigue of it, but wasn't entirely convinced by all my visual thoughts, which were pretty static. "We just need something more visually dynamic," he said while scratching the top of his head.

In the letter narrated by Roy, we learn that his tormentor, Harry Hodges is the son of a criminal who is in prison, and it was this section of the script that excited John. "We have to find a prison to film in mate. Then we can move away from beautifully lit domestic still lifes and into atmospheric interiors with eery sound effects." I could see exactly where he was coming from and nodded in agreement. This was to be John's first valuable contribution.

His next visual idea concerned the very last scene in which Roy talks about offering his services free of charge for any future publicity. My original visual was a simple newspaper headline taken from the book. But John hated it - quite rightly. I didn't much care for it myself. He gave me one of his funny looks and I could tell he was deep in thought. "Look. It has to end with a dramatic crescendo - a flourish. I know... we can have a load of paparazzi shot against a black background firing off flashes in quick succession followed by a dramatic shot of a newspaper falling onto paving stones in slow motion."

The thing with John is that he makes it all seem so easy. But he hadn't quite finished. "And to finish the whole thing, why don't we have a flock of animated blackbirds flying across the screen, forming a black background out of which we could reverse out some nice reviews?"

Most conversations of this nature would probably have just ended here. After all, the logistics of producing a short film like this to John's exacting standards would require a huge effort. But as with everything John throws himself into, he doesn't just do ideas; he carries them through. Within a couple of days he had produced an exquisite black and white storyboard that he had photographed himself and had arranged a meeting with his contacts at Hogarth Worldwide - London's premier post-production house. Needless to say, they loved it and were keen to produce it.

From this moment onwards the project began to take on a life of its own.

I found myself playing the roles of location scout, stylist and casting director, all rolled into one.

First off, we had to find the right voice for our eleven-year-old protagonist Roy Nuttersley. So at John's suggestion I ran an ad on the website Star Now, and set up an audition in the bar area of the Regents Park Holiday Inn. This is a perfect space for voice auditions as it's large, quiet and free. Ten parents answered the ad on behalf of their 11-year-old sons, along with one chap of 40 who was keen to audition for the part himself. 

Needless to say, we politely declined his offer but arranged to audition all the other candidates. We were very fortunate to have so many young actors to choose from, and by mid-day, we had pencilled two possible candidates, but following lunch this changed with the arrival of Jacob Tofts. His mother deliberately sat at another table so as not to distract her son, and Jacob took a quick look at the script and then proceeded to read it with such natural expression and feeling that John and I knew immediately that our quest was over.

We'd found Roy Nuttersley. The following week we arranged to record Jacob at one of Hogarth's lovely sound studios. Jacob is not only very talented, but also utterly charming and personable. I have no doubt that this young lad has a very bright future ahead of him.

Finding a prison to film in isn't one of life's easiest tasks. John's initial idea was to use the prison set at Wimbledon Film Studios - the very same set that had been used by TV productions like The Bill. But we soon discovered that the studios had gone into liquidation in 2014 and that the film set had been torn down. So I looked into finding decommissioned prisons that one could hire out. But the trouble here was that these looked too modern for a suburban fantasy, were miles outside London and were also prohibitively expensive to hire.

Most locations charge for the day; we only needed to film for a couple of hours. So it was with enormous relief that I stumbled upon Oxford Castle Unlocked, the 1,000 year old site that comprises various historic edifices including a crypt, and yes, a prison - or to be more precise, Prison D-Wing. The gaol was built in the 1800s and remained in use as a high security prison until 1996, and the whole site is now run as a museum. I was on the blower right away and discovered that we could film for an hour before the place opened to the general public. With these facts quickly established it was time to arrange our first recce.

As we thought, the prison with its corridors, creaky gates and Dickensian cells was absolutely perfect for our purposes. The only problem was that John was going to need a minimum of two hours to set up and shoot at least four sequences, so he took the manager aside and suggested we double the fee if the museum could double the filming time by opening up 2 hours earlier. It worked, and two weeks later we were back, this time with camera, lenses, lighting equipment and a fully kitted out prison guard in the form of one Philip Francis.

Phil does a lot of film extra work and looked the part in his prison guard's uniform, which I had managed to secure from Foxtrot costumiers and ebay. While John positioned his camera and lighting for the first shot Phil told me about his previous jobs. Among other things he'd been a gardener and had lovingly tended the late Douglas Adams's garden.

With the central section of the film in the can, we now had to find props and a studio for all the other scenes. My first port of call would be The Stockyard in the less than salubrious NW10; an extraordinary Aladdin's Cave of a place. Whatever you need for your film production, you'll find it here, whether it's great big Grecian columns, Norman arches, statues, water mills, petrol pumps, bus stations - you name it.

With the constant stream of vast articulated lorries coming and going and carrying off enormous quantities of props for some far-flung multi-million pound productions, I felt something of a fraud. After all, all I needed was a couple of antique book shelves, some old books and a few fake rubber flagstones. The lovely Reg who's been part of the place man and boy helped us find everything we needed and arranged for a couple of strapping lads to put it all in the back of my old jalopy of a car. 
Then I had to spend the best part of a week tracking down all our other props - everything from flooring and tablecloths to camping stoves, teddy bears and kettles - all of which had to look right in camera in black and white. This entailed trawling the internet where possible, but more often than not, traipsing round fabric suppliers, DIY warehouses and specialist shops.

The studio we chose to use was Photofusion in Brixton. It's a good space, and being Brixton, doesn't charge West End prices. It took John three full days to shoot most of our setups here, including the paparazzi, one of whom was yours truly minus spectacles.

The opening shot of the clock was shot in John's living room, and the final set-up of the stack of newspapers falling onto the paving slabs was filmed in my garden at night. For authenticity, I mocked up the front page of the fictitious Echo that appears in the book and even went as far as setting the type for the editorial. John was keen to create a rain machine for this scene to add atmosphere, but as luck would have it, the heavens opened for real.  

This, however, was very bad news indeed, and caused John to swear and curse profusely, as it meant he'd be unable to use his very expensive tungsten lighting, which would be open to the elements. The alternative was battery operated LED lighting, which was fine until John realised that he'd need some 'fill-in light' to highlight the side of the newspaper stack. After much further swearing and cursing I offered my mobile phone, which has a powerful LED torch. 

Surprisingly, it worked beautifully. While my son helped operate the Heath Robinson rain machine, I had the unenviable task of dropping the stack of newspapers onto the fake paving stones while being rained on by the rain machine as well as the real thing. I think we did about 30 takes, and my son had a lot of fun soaking his old man in the process.

With everything filmed, it was back to Hogarth to talk about music and sound effects. From my own experience of making commercials, music can often be something of a sticking point, but in this event, we got lucky from the outset. Andy the brilliant young sound engineer at Hogarth played us two tracks that he thought had the right feel. The first one was very good, but the second was absolutely perfect, and John very cleverly suggested building a ticking clock into the rhythm section to tie in with our opening scene.

A couple of days later, we were invited by Vee, Hogarth's senior editor to come and have a look at the first rough cut. Seeing this on the big screen for the first time was quite something, and made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end. It worked really well, and little Jacob's voice sang out as clear as a bell, while both music and sound effects added just the right level of atmosphere and intrigue.

The animated blackbirds sequence was the last piece of the jigsaw, and as John rightly said when he had the idea in the first place, it would be "a beautiful and memorable way to finish the film."
It's mind-boggling how much work goes into producing a two minute film. But you know instinctively when it gives you goosebumps after the first viewing that you've done something right, and that all that hard work had been worth it.

Alex Pearl




About the Author

Alex Pearl is an advertising copywriter living in NW London with his wife and two kids.  In 2014 his short story, 'Scared to Death' - the fictionalised account of the first British serviceman to be executed for cowardice during the First World War, was published by Mardibooks along with 22 other short stories in an anthology entitled 'The Clock Struck War.' A selection of pieces taken from his popular blog (rhubarbrabbit.blogspot.co.uk) are now also available in paperback published by Amazon under the title: 'Random Ramblings of a Short-sighted Blogger.' Find out more at http://sleepingwiththeblackbirds.co.uk/ and find Alex on Facebook and Twitter @AlexBPearl

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