While planning this year’s activities, I made the decision to
focus on a topic I call ‘Inside Historical Fiction’. As I said on my blog,
“what I plan to do is look under the covers of historical fiction to
illuminate those attributes that make it different from contemporary fiction.”
With that overarching objective in mind, the topic will explore seven aspects
of historical fiction writing: setting, characters, dialogue, world building,
conflict, plot and theme.
Readers are a critical point of reference. So, what can they
tell us?
When asked what kind of stories they
prefer, almost three quarters of those surveyed chose ‘fictional characters
within a backdrop of great historical events; close to half chose ‘the life of
a significant historical figure’.
When asked what ingredients create a
favourite novel, 86% said ‘feeling immersed in time and place’, but ‘authentic
and educational’ stories, the ‘dramatic arc of historical events’ and
‘characters both heroic and human’ also ranked high. When asked why they read
historical fiction, 76% said ‘to bring the past to life’.
Readers love historical fiction, but become
annoyed when authors play around with historical events. When asked ‘what
detracts from your enjoyment of historical fiction’, a large portion of readers
cited historical inaccuracies while others mentioned too much historical
detail, cumbersome dialogue, and characters with modern sensibilities.
Well now, that should be an easy recipe for
writers to follow, shouldn’t it?
Setting: discover enough about your setting(s) to immerse readers in that
time and place. Add details to inform and educate. Help readers understand what
living was like for all manner of people.
Characters: if you
choose a famous figure, ensure the details you include are accurate and find
ways to make bring out both heroic and human dimensions. When facts are absent,
search for the plausible. Understand the restrictions and obligations faced by
men and women of different classes. Avoid anachronistic behaviour.
Dialogue: use
accessible language sprinkled very lightly with references to era-specific
language and terms. Avoid words, phrases and idioms not yet invented. Be
careful with words whose meaning has changed over time; the word gay comes to
mind.
World building: search
for details that illuminate the period. Make sure you understand the political,
social, religious, legal, military, bureaucratic and family context. Country
borders are also a factor. Consider etiquette, fashion, food, drink and social
customs. Avoid anachronisms. Find the big events your characters would know
about – a plague, a riot, severe food shortages, wars, an eclipse, a monarch’s
death, a pope’s edict.
Conflict:
understand the conflicts inherent to your time period. These may or may not be
the dominant conflicts of your story, however, they will provide context for
them and could affect major or minor characters.
Plot: historical
fact is critical when it comes to plot, especially when writing about major
characters. You can’t have Eleanor of Aquitaine in England if the known facts
are that she was in a particular part of what we now know as France at that
particular time. Significant historical events cannot be ignored but use them
to add tension or plot twists.
Theme: themes
are generally universal. Myfanwy Cook offers a list in her book Historical
Fiction Writing: “ambition, madness, loyalty, deception, revenge, all is not
what it appears to be, love, temptation, guilt, power, fate/destiny, heroism,
hope, coming of age, death, loss, friendship, patriotism …” Interpret them
against the era of your writing.
Give some thought about how you guide readers into and through your world. It's good to educate but don’t overwhelm with details - and always respect the facts.