7 June 2021

Guest Post by Savannah Cordova: Five Crucial Tips for Writing Historical Fiction


 Knowing how to write a great short story is tough. To condense a narrative into 3,000 words or less, the writer really has to sculpt every sentence, being careful not to sacrifice substance or theme. Despite this difficulty, each week my colleagues and I read dozens of standout short stories as judges of Reedsy’s short story contest. 

One thing we notice is that authors who write in genres which require more worldbuilding — historical fiction included — can struggle to condense their narratives and pack a real punch in relatively few words. This is a shame, since historical fiction stories done right are some of my absolute favorites. To encourage more historical fiction writers to try this form, I’m going to share some of the wisdom I’ve gleaned from reading hundreds of short stories — as well as a few stellar examples.

1. Do your research 

Different kinds of historical fiction require different kinds of prep work. For a historical romance, the writer needs to know all about societal norms and expectations; for a fictional account of a battle, the tactical decisions and maneuvers matter most. When writing a short story, it’s all about immediately grounding readers in the culture of the time period. You need to know how people thought, how they went about their daily lives, and what stories they might tell about themselves and their world.

If you want your historical fiction story to foreground a real historical figure, you’ll need to do the kind of research a biographer might do. Then use those facts as your source of inspiration. As long as what you write is plausible, you can use your imagination to speculate and fill in the gaps, taking the story where the historian can’t go.

2. Find an interesting way into the time period

One common misconception among historical fiction writers is the notion that an elaborate, multi-POV, multi-act story structure is the only way to tell “the whole truth.” But writers who try to encompass everything they know within the scope of a short story will inevitably spread themselves too thin.

Leave it to the historian to give an unbiased account. What you need to do is get behind your protagonist and tell their story. Figure out what’s meaningful and interesting about their connection to the time period, then try to pinpoint your story's key emotion. Despite the historical backdrop, it’s this key emotion that will move the reader.

One recent submission that did this really well was The Ritual, which takes place in New York during WWII. The author uses what they know of the period — the hysteria, the uncertainty, and the mistreatment of Japanese and Italian immigrants — to tell a moving story about community, family, and the home. When they touch upon historical events, this sentiment still permeates every paragraph. Take a look:

When the FBI agents came for Luigi, he had been cutting through a beam that was part of a new project that Giovanni had been doing on the house. Giovanni had given the old Victorian a face lift; its termite infested wooden exterior was replaced by cream colored stucco and red window boxes.

3. Infuse your story with historical details

Though it’s true that you shouldn’t try to cram everything you know about a time period into a short story, sprinkling in accurate historical details will keep readers interested and make your story much more credible.

To that end, during your research, keep an inventory of small details that will add color to the world of your story. While writing, you can also make note of any details you include that you might want to check for accuracy, or replace with something more emblematic of the times.

Of course, you don’t want to add information just for the sake of it. To hold your audience’s attention, you’ll want to emphasize select details that advance plot or characterization. Here’s a great example from a story called Treading Water, set when Elvis Presley was king:

The ding of an overhead bell signaled my arrival as I pushed open the door. A wave of cool air hit my face and I sighed in relief. On a shelf, a small electric-powered fan blew a soothing breeze straight at me. I was surprised the store even had electricity, but I supposed that since most of Main St did, there was no reason for it not to. A portable radio rested on the front counter, by an ashtray full of cigarette butts, but it wasn’t turned on.

4. Don’t get bogged down in dialogue

One detail that I’ve seen way too many writers get bogged down in: the vocabulary or grammatical structure of their historical era. Yes, speech has shifted dramatically over time, but you won’t shatter any illusions for your reader by failing to replicate historical speech patterns.

In fact, it’s far more noticeable when a writer chooses to write in a specific dialect. Think of Trainspotting by Irvine Welsh and the narrator’s thick Scottish dialect — it can make for pretty opaque reading, right? The odd word or occasional phrase can work to reinforce your historical setting, but don’t bust a gut trying to stuff them in. Include too many and your story might become tougher to read than it’s worth.

One of the stories submitted to our contest, Adventurin’, did a great job of adding some historical color to the speech of one of its characters. The story is narrated in modern English, but the protagonist’s loud, loquacious friend Jed speaks, well, like this:

They know our story; you know, ‘cause their Paw has sung our story-song to them in front of the fireplace after their Maw has done the Bible readin’. Not too soon after, mind you, because their Paw don’t want to shame the Word of God with our story. That happens, and kids won’t want to listen to Bible readin’ anymore. Famous is fine, but you and me don’t want to come between children and the Almighty.

Jed’s voice comes through so clearly, helping us understand the character and the world he’s grown up in, and immersing us in the historical context without making the prose jarring to read.

5. Start with a punch, not exposition

Most writers instinctively understand the need to hook readers as quickly as possible. As you might imagine, the need is even greater when it comes to short fiction, where everything is so compact. As a judge, I’m looking for a hook within the first paragraph — if not the first sentence — to convince me that this story is going to be engaging.

If your story opens with a flowery description of a period costume, an antiquated building, or the events of the year in question, I’m going to check out. I understand the desire to establish the time period early on, and that’s not a bad idea — we even prompted readers to do just that in this contest — but as that prompt asked of our writers, try not to lay it on too thick.

Let’s take a look at the opening lines of this brilliant story, The Things You Don’t Say, as an example:

It was the hottest summer of the decade the year we bought our first air conditioner. It was August 1988, the summer before I entered high school, the summer before life got complicated. The six of us (seven if you count Daisy, the basset hound) loaded into the green Chevy station wagon and drove to Sears, Roebuck and Co. (as it was still called back then.) We were the only people on our street to get an air conditioner.

These opening lines instantly let us know we’re being transported back to the 80s. (So much so that I don’t think the author needs to tell us the date — luckily for them, it wasn’t an entry in the aforementioned contest, but another contest without such requirements.)

But beyond that, they also create atmosphere, clearly establish the narrator’s voice, and set the tone for the whole story. It’s hot, times are changing, and I don’t know about you, but I’m hooked. So if you ever submit a story to our contest at Reedsy, remember to open with something like this. I look forward to reading what you write!

Savannah Cordova

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About the Author

Savannah Cordova is a writer with Reedsy, a marketplace that connects self-publishing authors and publishers with the world’s best editors, designers, and marketers. In her spare time, Savannah enjoys reading and writing short stories. Naturally, she’s a big fan of historical fiction — when it’s done right. Find out more at https://reedsy.com/ and on Twitter @ReedsyHQ

4 June 2021

Special Guest Post by Alison Morton, Author of the Roma Nova series


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Is history fixed?

Small and large-scale things happen every day in our own time that could set our lives off on a different course. Each personal decision we make changes the course of our lives from what it might have been. And all of us probably sit down at some stage and wonder "what if I'd done X, or if Y had happened me?"

What if King Harold had won the Battle of Hastings in 1066? Or if Julius Caesar had taken notice of the warning that assassins wanted to murder him on the Ides of March? Or if Elizabeth I of England had married and had children? If Washington hadn’t crossed the Delaware River on Christmas night in 1776?

My Roma Nova thrillers are set in an alternative timeline where a fragment of the Roman Empire battled its way through to the present. Time diverged in the past. AD 395 to be precise, when a small group of Romans saw their empire crumbling and left Italy to seek shelter in the mountains. Their decision seemed small scale, but the effect was to change their world.

Some readers had told me they enjoy the Roma Nova stories purely as thrillers. Others have enjoyed the 'women running things' aspect or the way that Roman history has gone off in a different direction.

Alternative history fiction has three short rules, or conventions:

• the timeline split at a defined moment which is in the past – the point of divergence (PoD)

• the new timeline follows a different path forever – there is no going back.(This is not time travel!)

• stories should show the ramifications of the divergence and how the new reality functions.

But the story must be strong in itself and not just rely on the 'oo-ah factor' of the different timeline. And I believe the characters should be well-rounded, human and 'normal'. As readers, we must be able to cheer for them when things go well and commiserate with them when it all goes wrong as it often does for Carina and Aurelia in Roma Nova.

Aurelia’s stories in the series – AURELIA, NEXUS, INSURRECTIO and RETALIO – are set between the (alternative) 1960s to early 1980s and see the rivalry between Aurelia Mitela and Caius Tellus intensify and become lethal.

She comes from one of the Twelve Families which helped found Roma Nova at the end of the fourth century, so she has a lot of history supporting her. In her younger career, she was an effective successful Praetorian officer, diplomat and later intelligence agent – a spy. She becomes a senator, businesswoman and advisor to Imperatrix Silvia, Roma Nova’s ruler.

Caius, on the other hand, has tried to bully Aurelia all her life. Given every privilege by his mother and grandmother, Caius has never to struggle for anything. Strong willed and intelligent, he dominated his circle and charmed older adults with his good looks and broad smiles. He has no idea of anybody else’s interest but his own.

But the chief failing that gnaws away at him is that he could never break Aurelia’s shell, either with charm or by force. He resents that she can see through him. He takes it very personally…

Caius makes a power grab in INSURRECTIO and imposes a tyrannical regime – a traditionally Roman way of acceding to power. Not that it has happened that much in fifteen centuries in this new Rome’s existence! (I used the coming to power and the regime in 1930s Germany as inspiration for much of this.) RETALIO recounts the fierce determination of Aurelia and the loyal Roma Novans to resist and combat the tyranny. (You may see parallels with 1940s resistance in this story.)

Alison Morton

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About the Author

Alison writes award-winning thrillers series featuring tough, but compassionate heroines. She blends her deep love of France with six years’ military service and a life of reading crime, historical, adventure and thriller fiction. On the way, she collected a BA in modern languages and an MA in history. Now Alison continues to write thrillers and drink wine in France with her husband. Find out more at Alison's website  https://alison-morton.com and find her on Facebook and Twitter @alison_morton

3 June 2021

Special Guest Post by Clare Flynn, Author of Sisters at War


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1940 Liverpool. The pressures of war threaten to tear apart two sisters traumatised by their father’s murder of their mother. With her new husband, Will, a merchant seaman, deployed on dangerous Atlantic convoy missions, Hannah needs her younger sister Judith more than ever. But when Mussolini declares war on Britain, Judith's Italian sweetheart, Paolo is imprisoned as an enemy alien, and Judith's loyalties are divided.

The Inspiration behind Sisters at War

I wrote Sisters at War as a standalone novel, but it continues the story of Hannah and Will Kidd of Storms Gather Between Us. That book ended just as the Second World War was beginning and I wanted to explore the impact of the war on their lives and the lives of those they care about.

The book is mainly set in Liverpool, where I was born. My parents were children when the war began and my dad ended it serving as a pilot in the Royal Air Force. My mum was evacuated for a while at the beginning of the war before returning to Liverpool. Both of them grew up in Orrell Park where the book is set – as did our relatives.

I knew from my mother’s stories that Liverpool had taken a pounding in the war – indeed I saw the evidence with my own eyes as even long after the war ended, bomb sites marked many street corners. We left the city when I was about six, but I loved going back there for weekends and holidays. Naturally I wanted to delve into the history to discover what my parents’ experiences might have been. Neither are around anymore for me to question – and when I was younger, to my lasting shame, I wasn’t interested.

Will Kidd is a merchant seaman. That also has its roots in my family. My mother’s father was a ship’s captain, her grandfather was an able seaman and she had uncles and cousins in Ireland who were seamen. When I began to research the background for the book, I was shocked by the enormous toll the largely unsung heroes of the merchant navy paid in the war to keep Britain fed and armed. 

The port of Liverpool was pivotal to this as most of the transatlantic traffic came through the Liverpool docks. This was why the city suffered such heavy bombings as Nazi Germany intended to destroy the port and hence bring Britain to its knees. The sailors undertaking those Atlantic crossings had the dice stacked against them as Hitler, with his wolf packs of U-boats and squadrons of German bombers based on the west coast of France, made the voyages a perilous endeavour. By the end of the war 2,232 merchant ships had been lost in the North Atlantic.

My digging and reading unearthed another source of inspiration – the treatment of Italian nationals in Britain after Mussolini entered the war. I was aware that many were interned and knew a. lot of them had been sent to the Isle of Man and incarcerated in hotels and camps. What I didn’t know was what happened to those less fortunate. 

When Winston Churchill issued the order to “collar the lot”, the Home Office took him at his word and every Italian man over sixteen was rounded up. Many found themselves on the Arandora Star, bound for internment in Canada. A former luxury cruise liner, the ship didn’t get very far as it was torpedoed off the coast of Ireland, with great loss of life – mostly Italians. The survivors – and many other “aliens” were then put on another ship, the Dunera, bound for Australia. 

The treatment meted out to the Italian and German POWs by British guards on that ship was utterly shameful. Once I had read about it, I had to include this episode in the book. Incidents such as these are often air-brushed out of history, but the truth is usually far more nuanced.



HMT Dunera in 1940 (Wikimedia Commons)

The other area I wanted to focus on is the way war impacted civilians: the ever-present fear of air raids, the need for frugality and rationing, the desire to help others by volunteering. It is hard to imagine how it must have felt, night after night, hearing the wail of sirens and having to take shelter in a damp tin-roofed hole in the back garden, under the kitchen table or under the stairs. 

The sheer gut-wrenching fear of those aeroplanes roaring overhead, the deafening explosions and the horror of emerging to find your house now a pile of rubble. More than four thousand people were killed in the Merseyside bombing raids. Ten thousand homes were completely destroyed, a further 16,400 seriously damaged and 45,500 sustaining some form of damage. Amidst this destruction, there were countless acts of heroism and an indomitable spirit that ensured that throughout the war, the port of Liverpool never stopped functioning.


Liverpool centre in Blitz
(Ministry of Information Photo Division official photographer, 
Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons)

Thanks for inviting me to give you some background on what inspired me to write Sisters at War. I hope the book will bring some awareness about the often-forgotten true history behind my story.

Clare Flynn

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About the Author

Clare Flynn is the author of thirteen historical novels and a collection of short stories. A former International Marketing Director and strategic management consultant, she is now a full-time writer.  Having lived and worked in London, Paris, Brussels, Milan and Sydney, home is now on the coast, in Sussex, England, where she can watch the sea from her windows. An avid traveler, her books are often set in exotic locations. Clare is a Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts, a member of The Society of Authors, ALLi, and the Romantic Novelists Association. When not writing, she loves to read, quilt, paint and play the piano.  Find out more at Clare's website https://clareflynn.co.uk/ and follow her on Facebook and Twitter @clarefly


1 June 2021

Special Guest Post by Kate Abley, Author of Hausa Blue


 Available at Amazon UK and Amazon US

From the contaminated capital to moth-eaten Bengal, a multi-racial British Empire is getting round to revolution. Will the Queen’s imposter be released from the Tower of London? Who can she be now?

Thank you so much for inviting to your guest post today, it is wonderful that you provide this platform for authors and resource for readers. I have enjoyed having to work out why I wrote Hausa Blue. I usually ponder a few ideas until a story forms vaguely in my mind. Then, I start writing and only stop when it takes me to a place where I need to do a bit more research. So, writing about my motivation has been a challenge. Here goes.

I love historical novels but I also wanted to write something that reflects the cultural makeup of the UK now. To do that I had to invent a slightly different British history. The story in Hausa Blue may appear quite unusual, but the research behind it is traditionally of the same sort as any historical fiction. I spent a great deal of time reading and taking notes about the 18th and 19th centuries in Britain, Africa and India, as well as long hours in the British Museum examining artifacts.

The research is the environment for a story. The characters and their actions lead the drama. Dipa, the young dress-makers daughter, paces up and down her cell in the Tower of London as former queens are wont to do. She doesn’t know why the charge of treason has been dropped, why the guards are not beating her any more, or why they have changed their uniforms. All she knows is that there is a New Management in the British Empire that she ruled over before she was found out.

If she is going to be released, she must reveal how a good girl like her washed her face and hands before she went to meet the woman who would embroil her in a life of lies and very well-dressed debauchery.

As Dipa confesses of the extravagance and decadence of the Aristoi class she was so willing to join, we learn about the Lady Aditi Egremont-Cooch-Bahar, rich, beautiful and from one of the most influential families in the Empire who is undisputed queen of the Yangans, the ‘it-girls’ of this world.

Aditi is clever too, but has played one too many japes She has escaped to the other side of the world and the land of some of her forefathers. Brewing in her mind is a sort of plan to turn the tide back in her favour, all she needs is the right equipment.

I was motivated because a subject that has interested me since my teens, British Colonial history, began to become part of the news. The distortions that this topic has suffered from, both past and present, are a source of great frustration.

I am a Londoner, born and bred, and was brought up in Notting Hill Gate, where many of the first and second generations of black people from the Caribbean were my friends and neighbours. I was lucky enough to be one of the first generations that considers migration and immigration to be not just normal, but beneficial to the capital and our United Kingdom.

I was also fortunate that my parents, both Londoners themselves, took the time to take me, my brother and sister on a myriad of trips and visits. We explored the well-known destinations like the Tower of London, and less well-known parts of London, including the slippery cobbles of Covent Garden when it was a vegetable market, the East End Docks looming in all their grimy dereliction, the bustle of Fleet Street when it was alive with newspaper and magazine employees and bagel shops in Whitechapel as well as many other places that are now entirely different. Through these journeys, I learned that London has had ties with the rest of the world for centuries, some good and some bad, through trade, commerce, culture and banking. I wanted my story to reflect this; the good and bad in our past.

When I grew up I became a nursery and reception teacher and worked for many years in the East End of London. By that time the Bangla Town we know and love had come into being and again I learned. This time it was about the rich and majestic history of Bengal, arguably the true birth place of the British Empire, which became both a part of India and also what is now Bangladesh.

It was these experiences, that led me to want to question the current idea of Cultural Appropriation. The idea that people of one race, particularly the white ones, should not take narratives, visual or musical tropes from other, mainly black and brown, cultures. White writers have been criticised for writing black characters, celebrities have been admonished for ‘appropriating’ black hair styles and many people who have shown appreciation for a culture into which they were not born are told to ‘stay in their lane’.

But I had grown up with an understanding that all the cultures should belong to everyone. I believe it is not a crime, but a duty to learn and love as many diverse ways of seeing and being as one can.

I will never inhabit a black skin, I have never been to Bengal nor 1814 for that matter. I have never made a dress, fought in a war or pretended to be a member of the Royal Family. Luckily, I am a human being and can imagine these things, and, hopefully, use words to enable the reader to do the same thing.

I understand that that accusations of Cultural Appropriation come from the entirely justifiable anger and grief caused by the actual appropriation, by mainly white people, of the land, the resources and worst of all the people, who are black or brown, not just in history but into the present. But when I take an idea, which after all can be owned by as many minds as hold it, from someone, we are both richer.

If we do not share culture we are all the poorer for it. In addition, there is an argument that says it is when two cultures come up to each other that both are renewed and develop. Anyone who has enjoyed Hamlet and his entourage sharing the Wakanda salute, as I did in an RSC production with a mainly black cast a few years ago, will agree with me.

It was these experiences and ideas that led me to create an alternative, multi-racial, British Empire.

So how could such a thing plausibly come into being? In my opinion, the late 17th and early 18th centuries were probably the only times where such an eventuality could have occurred. These were times of immense social and economic change, the first when more than the odd exceptional individual of low birth could achieve great wealth and power, and the first when the ideas of equality and justice for all were widespread. Thus, I invented ‘The Discord of 1814’, where a Hanoverian king George overcame prejudices of various kinds to make an African princess his queen. This means that the royal family in my story, as well as most upper-class families are multi-racial.

You might recognise the cover image on the cover of Hausa Blue. I am fascinated with the woman who this 17th pectoral mask represents.

The beauty and craftsmanship are gorgeous but I think knowing a little about who the mask represents adds to its wonder. She is thought to be Queen Idia of the kingdom of Benin, in what is now Nigeria. She was a great warrior who is said to have led many battles against the enemies her son the Ibo, or king.

The mask forms part of the collection known as the Benin Bronzes, which were ‘appropriated’ in 1896 and many of which now reside in the British Museum.

Next time you’re in London, you might enjoy a trip to see the exquisite metal, wood and ivory work of the Benin Bronzes, which date from the 1600s. I go to the British Museum quite often, to look at the beautiful Queen Idia, as well as many other favourites. So you never know, we may bump into each other.

Kate Abley

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About the author

Kate Abley was accidentally born and now intentionally lives in London, England, where, amongst other things she has been an awful front woman in a psychobilly band, good dish-washer, bad shop assistant, officially outstanding Early Years teacher, nice charitable fund-giver and failed political activist. Last century, she wrote the non-fiction book, ‘Swings and Roundabouts: The Dangers of Outdoor Play Safety’ (1999). Nowadays, she is a respectable and happily married woman with two children who have grown-up pretty well and she has turned her hand to killing plants and writing stories. She published her first novel, Changing the Subject, in 2019.  Find out more at Kate Abley‘s website: kateabley.com and follow her on  Facebook and Twitter @AbleyKate

28 May 2021

Special Guest Post by Lara Byrne - Writing Lotharingia: Charlemagne's Heir


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Holy Roman Empire, AD 1062 One day Countess Matilde will rule like a man, and inherit her mother's mysterious relics, but she cannot escape the marriage arranged for her. When her enigmatic overlord King Heinrich rescues her from her abusive husband, friendship blossoms into forbidden love. But her personal journey has only just begun. A medieval tale of love, political intrigue, and relic hunting.

Through Lotharingia, the first volume of a trilogy dedicated to Countess Matilde of Canossa, I attempt to breathe new life into the rich tapestry of the Holy Roman Empire at the dawn of the second millennium. The period bursts with remarkable characters, not widely known outside academic circles, intrigues and history-changing events.

In the 11th century, women of all classes became their husband’s property at marriage, and, in cardinal Humbert of Silva Candida’s re-wording of St Paul’s, were forbidden even to speak in church. Nevertheless, a handful of these silenced women – all heiresses of Carolingian blood – rose above the legal and religious constraints of their sex to find their own voice and claim power for themselves.

Comitissa, Ducatrix, Marchionissa, Matilde of Canossa was famed throughout Europe for her wealth, her political influence, her controversial lifestyle – and for repeatedly defeating the Holy Roman emperor on the field.

Yet she remains elusive, the patina of time thick on her. The drawn-out conflict between Holy Roman Empire and Rome known as the Investiture Controversy was bloody and marked by vitriolic attacks between the two parts sadly familiar in our ‘age of fake news.’

In these propaganda wars, Matilda was not exclusively a victim. She played an active part, re-writing herself and others, in the process shielding her personality and motives. The veil she wears in her surviving portraits is an apt metaphor of her self-representation.


 Yet what we know of Matilde, and what is hinted, or unexpectedly surfaces here and there in the chroniclers, unleashes the imagination, invites us to fill the gaps, to re-write her as our own, to resort to fiction for answers that history cannot give us.

In an age when divorce was not an option, not once but twice she walked down the path of estrangement, living apart from her husbands. To my knowledge, she was also the first woman to lead armies since Roman times. A third-born girl who ended up inheriting her father’s rights, Matilde must have felt God had chosen her for a special mission. So, clearly, did the Roman Church. She was in her mid-twenties when, twenty-five years before the First Crusade, Pope Gregory asked to lead an expedition to Jerusalem.

Then there is her complex relationship with her overlord, Heinrich of Germany, future Holy Roman emperor.

If we try to extrapolate the bare facts from the sources, they were both raised by exceptionally powerful Carolingian mothers after losing their fathers at an early age – and to add a Romeo and Juliet dimension Matilde’s father may have been ordered by Heinrich’s father. 

They spent a year together in Germany as children, and, after Matilde returned to Italy, they faced similar fates. They were both married against their will, after resisting their lot with unusual determination. Matilde was dispatched to take her vows just, just as Heinrich was trying, unsuccessfully, to divorce from his wife.


 There was, undeniably, a bond between Matilde and Heinrich, which continued even after his death. In surviving letters, he claimed to trust Matilde and her mother above all other princes. Although contemporary imperial propaganda alleged that she was Pope Gregory’s lover, when I suspect there was a deep feeling between Matilde and her king, I walk in the footsteps of literary giants. The German poet Heine, the Italian playwright Pirandello, and more recently the novelist Mancinelli have all sexualised Matilde and Heinrich’s relationship.

My decision to place their forbidden love in 1070-71 is based on factual considerations. Heinrich’s movements since his coronation are documented, whereas Matilde’s whereabouts before she inherits her lands in 1076 are only limitedly recoverable. Still, as an illustrious imperial heiress and a political leader in her own right, after marrying the Duke of Lotharingia at the end of 1069, she is likely to have spent time at court.

As far as I could establish, no contemporary sources suggest that their dealings in 1070-71 went beyond the customary feudal relationship. There is also o backing in the sources for the possibility that Matilde’s stillborn daughter, born in early 1071, may have been a lovechild. But soon after the birth Matilde ran away from her husband and escaped to Italy, at great personal risk.

I also asked myself whether the Church’s determination to marry Matilde and Heinrich off to their betrotheds concealed a decision to prevent them from marrying each other. A matrimonial alliance between Matilde and Heinrich could have had negative repercussions for the Church, and that may well be the only reason. But I focused on another.

Mediaeval piety is marked by an obsessive fascination with relics. The German Crown owned the Holy Spear, a mysterious weapon, bought at enormous cost by one of Heinrich’s predecessors and reputed to have talismanic powers – a belief that run throughout German history all the way to the Third Reich. Heinrich’s predecessors had won decisive battles after placing the spearhead before their armies. His devotion to the Holy Spear is hard to dispute. He had an inscription added to it, stating that a nail hammered into the blade was a relic from the Crucifixion.


As for Matilde, we know she had relics of her own that may have reinforced her belief that she was fit to be a military leader in the name of God, turning her femininity into a negligible consideration. Her mother had been involved in the rediscovery of the Holy Blood relics (which remain in Mantova to this day).


 I have tried to “connect the dots” – and the relics above - by inventing the prophecy of the child of Charlemagne. Prophecies were a mediaeval political tool, leveraged mainly by hermits and preachers. The millenarist impulse has yielded a few variations on the theme of the birth of a child who would usher a golden age. Could political rulers have devised their own prophecies? Heinrich’s grandfather, the Faustian Emperor Conrad, rumoured to have made a pact with the devil to secure the empire for his dynasty, seems an attractive candidate.

Although Lotharingia ends in 1072, the tapestry of eleventh century continental politics continued to be defined by Matilde and Heinrich into the new century. It will form the subject of my next book, in which the king and countess meet again, in vastly different circumstances.

Lara Byrne


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About the Author

Lara Byrne is a Londoner with European roots. Too many years in the corporate world taught her that so much still needs to be done to raise the profile and the opportunities for women, and that women gain strength from finding historical role models to identify with. Lara is currently hard at work on a sequel to Lotharingia, provisionally entitled The Road to Canossa. Find out more at larabyrneauthor.com and follow Lara on Twitter @larafbyrne

27 May 2021

Special Guest Post by Jacquie Rogers, Author of The Governor’s Man: A Quintus Valerius Mystery


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Roman Britain 224AD: When silver from the Emperor’s mines goes missing, Roman Imperial Investigator Quintus Valerius reluctantly returns to Britannia. With his British assistant Tiro, Valerius uncovers a conspiracy of fraud and rebellion. The plot involves a resurgence in Druid activity, and the murders of potential witnesses. Even the investigator’s former lover, Lady Julia, seems connected to the crimes. Valerius begins to piece together clues that tell a shocking truth — and cast a terrible light on his own past.


Inspiration for The Governor’s Man

In 2013 my husband Peter and I moved to a small village in the Somerset Levels. That’s the area of Somerset inland from Weston and Burnham, and bounded by Glastonbury and Wells to the east. It’s a very atmospheric place of willows and water, mostly unknown to the visitors who roar past, on their way south along the M5 to Devon and Cornwall. I myself knew nothing about the county either, so I took myself off to the Museum of Somerset in Taunton to find out.

I was wowed to see there the Shapwick hoard, the largest trove of Roman denarii ever found at that time in the Western Empire. What’s more, the silver had been neatly buried in a large, previously-unknown courtyard villa on a slight ridge in the Polden Hills, right in the middle of nowhere, barely eight miles south of my home. The villa was excavated in 1998, and carbon dating established that the hiding of the silver coincided with the demolition of the villa in 224AD, possibly after a fire.

The nearby Mendip Hills held a wealth of lead and silver, right up to Victorian times. This mineral treasure was known to the Romans, and was one of the prime drivers for Vespasian to push his legions quickly west at the time of the Roman conquest. On display in the British Museum is a lead ingot, fraudulently over-stamped to look as if the silver has been extracted from the ore, when in fact it was still present.

Someone was stealing silver from the Emperor, who retained rights to any silver mined. You could see why —soldiers were paid in silver denarii, and soldiers were the power that kept an Emperor on the throne. To steal Imperial silver was a capital offence.

My research

On that day in summer 2013, as I stood gazing at the glinting mass of over 9,000 coins, I knew I had to write this story. Of how the silver, the destroyed villa, and the falsely-stamped lead ingot all came together.

I located a company — in the US, of course — who make available online transcripts of archaeological digs around the world. They supplied me with a report by archaeologists R Abdy, RA Brunning and CJ Webster of their dig in 1998, snappily entitled The discovery of a Roman villa at Shapwick and its Severan coin hoard of 9238 silver denarii.

The villa is now reburied and totally invisible, in a lumpy field on a farm which shall remain unnamed. I confess I went there though, scrambling over blackberry briars to find the site. I stood a long time, looking at the sloping views north to an RSPB reserve, and beyond to the Mendips. East was the clear outline of Glastonbury Tor. South, and slightly uphill, is the Roman road linking the Polden Hills with the Fosse Way, the main Roman highway from Exeter to Lincoln.

What a story, I thought. All I need is a detective.

I went to the British Library in London where I found accounts of the Frumentariate, a corps of senior officers set up by Emperor Hadrian to investigate crimes threatening the Emperor’s personal interests across the Empire. These officers were detached from their legions and headquartered in Rome. In the absence of any kind of police force, the corps carried out a wide variety of tasks that these days might fall to the Border Force, MI5/6, Special Branch, or the military police. Thus was Frumentarius Quintus Valerius born.

Crimes and investigator I now had. But cui bono? Well, there never was a shortage of would-be Emperors with the right personal connections hoping to seize the throne… So I looked into the political history of Britannia, circa 220-225 AD. And found —virtually nothing. Apparently nothing of any note occurred in the remote island province between the withdrawal of Caracalla and his legions in 211, after the Severan campaigns in Caledonia ended, and the 260s, when Britain joined the short-lived breakaway “Empire of the Gauls”. Caracalla did split Britannia into two provinces, so my story strictly speaking happens in Britannia Superior. The only other potential factoid I uncovered was that a Governor, who might have been called Aradius Rufinus, might have served in Britain around the same time.

They say where there is a dearth of fact, fiction will flood in. I had a framework for a mystery plot in place, but I wanted my story-telling to reveal a deeper side to Roman Britain at the height of the Empire. At nearly two centuries after the Roman invasion, Britain must have been a place of mixed identities, of clashes of tradition and innovation, and the deeply-rooted experience of the colonised who can no longer remember life before the colonisers. 

So I gave Quintus two significant British companions, who have their own voices in this story and the books to follow: Tiro, his reluctant new assistant, who is passionate about his beloved vibrant London; and Lady Julia Aureliana, wealthy resident of Bath, trained healer, traditional leader of the Durotriges tribe and who knew Quintus in happier times. These characters are entirely fictitious, but I have researched both what little is known of the preceding British/Druid culture, and also the experiences of people living under other Empires. Specifically our own days of colonisation and empire.

My aim with The Governor’s Man was to write a pacy, twisting tale of murder, intrigue and treachery, set in a little-known period of RomanoBritish history. I hope I’ve also given breath to complex characters who thought of themselves as both Romans and Britons, being part of a great Empire whilst continuing to live traditional lives on the fringes of civilisation.

If you enjoy The Governor’s Man, do follow me and please let me know your thoughts. The follow up book is due out in 2022.

Jacquie Rogers

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About the Author

Jacquie Rogers had several careers, including advertising and university teaching, before realising that writing held more allure. Her short stories have been published in several countries. In summer 2020 she was Runner Up in the Lincoln Book Festival story competition. Lockdown gave her the opportunity to write the Roman mystery novel she’d been working on for a while. The Governor’s Man, the first of a trilogy set in third century Roman Britain, was published by Sharpe Books in May 2021. Jacquie lives in the Malvern Hills of England. She walks daily with her husband and a lunatic Staffie cross. When not masked and socially distanced, Jacquie loves long-distance travel on a Triumph motorbike, and discussing politics, travel and books with friends. She spends a lot of time in tea shops and pubs. Find out more at Jacquie’s website https://jacquierogersauthor.com/ and follow her on Twitter @rogers_jacquie

21 May 2021

Special Guest Interview with H D Coulter, Author of Saving Grace: Deception. Obsession. Redemption


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Boston. 1832: After surviving the brutal attack and barely escaping death at Lancaster Castle, Beatrice Mason attempts to build a new life with her husband Joshua across the Atlantic in Beacon Hill. But, as Beatrice struggles to cope with the pregnancy and vivid nightmares, she questions whether she is worthy of redemption. 

I'm pleased to welcome author H D Coulter to The Writing Desk:

Tell us about your latest book

Saving Grace takes place 6 months after the ending of Ropewalk, book 1 and deals with the aftermath. Bea and Joshua are finding their feet in Beacon Hill, Boston as Joshua tries to find work at Boston Harbour and Bea tries to come to terms with the pregnancy with Hanley’s child and coping with a form of PTSD, a result of the ending of Ropewalk. Whilst in Ulverston, Hanley is plotting his revenge and tracking them down. 

“You are my child; you are not his – you are innocent – you are loved – you are mine.” The mantra Bea repeats, reminding herself that the child is innocent and loved.

Bea and Joshua begin their new life with their child and finding happiness through love and reconnection together. Joshua is rebuilding his position in his new role, while Bea secretly becomes involved with the abolitionist movement with the help of her friend Sarah. Discovering the underground railroad and the hidden path across America. 

But unbeknown to them all, Hanley watches from the shadows and is planning to take it all away.

What is your preferred writing routine?

My main writing routine is still waking at 5am and using the quiet time in the house to work. However, my 4-year-old is waking a little earlier and during the past few months, I have found myself writing and editing at night-time. Once I edited until 3am to complete Saving Grace in time. I have a desk in the corner of the living room with mountains of notebooks, various colours of pens and post-its scattered around. 

What advice do you have for aspiring writers?

My main advice for writers would be; do it for the love of writing. For myself, I have a passion for writing and creating these worlds and the love of the characters. But if you want to publish either traditional or independent, you need to take is seriously, research the publishing process and dedicate time towards it. 

 Once you have written ‘The end’ is an amazing feeling and celebrate reaching this milestone, but it is not the end. Now you must edit several times and reach out to Beta readers to give you feedback. When you are involved in the story, sometimes it’s hard to step back and see it from a reader’s point of view. Especially if they can give you detailed points where you can improve the story and character arcs. 

Create a writing, editing and publishing time and keep to it as you do for any other work. Research marketing and how best to get word out on your book, including social media, website, other writers and authors. Mostly learn from others and support one another, writer friends are invaluable. 

What have you found to be the best way to raise awareness of your books?

The best ways to raise awareness would be social media, blog tours, newsletters and creating a network with other authors, who help to boost fellow authors. Talk about your writing process on social media to give readers and future readers an insight into the world you have created but also personal to you. Promote your books but don’t make it about buying the book. Add reviews, a sneak peek or advice, etc. 

Tell us something unexpected you discovered during your research.

I choose to locate some of Saving Grace in Beacon Hill as in that time, the area of Boston was flourishing. It was a representation of what was happening across America in the 1830s, with various cultures descending on different areas of the hill. A class divide between north and south slope in wealth, with a sense of unrest bubbling underneath. With Joshua’s background in shipping, it was a natural selection for the character to choose that location with business connections. 

However, when I was researching Beacon Hill, I discovered the African meeting house, which was a hub for the abolitionist movement and a rumoured connection to the underground railroad. Once I stumbled across this, I fell down the research rabbit hole and saw Bea, like her father supporting change. This unexpected discovery changed the plot of Saving Grace and added an element that seemed like a natural development for the characters, especially Bea to take, helping her to find her voice and strength again. Which created a whole new subplot to the novel and leading into book 3. 

What was the hardest scene you remember writing?

There are several scenes in the Ropewalk series in book 1 and 2 that brought me to tears as I wrote and featured sensitive subject matter which was essential, I got correct. Especially the last third of Ropewalk when everything goes wrong for Bea. I felt her emotions and placed all that into the novel. 

In book 2, at the beginning Bea is dealing with a form of PTSD after the effects of living through her ordeal. I felt it was important not to wash over and put aside what she had lived through. That wouldn’t be natural. Instead, it shows how she comes to terms with it and finding the strength to thrive once more. 

As the author, I complied a lot of research into the subject matter, both her ordeal and dealing with the effects afterwards and how it affects your mental health. I felt some authors who feature these scenes either don’t do the subject justice or don’t show the impact it has on the character. For the Ropewalk series, it needed to take place as a continuation of the plot and the long-term affect of it. However, I wanted to represent the raw truth of the effects, especially during that times period, but also the mental health of not just Bea but the other characters around her. 

What are you planning to write next?

I am currently working on book 3 in the Ropewalk series, which fans of Saving Grace will be happy about since it ends with a dramatic cliff hanger. Book 3 will be out in late autumn around November time. But you can sign up to the newsletter to get any updates and sneak peeks. 

H D Coulter

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About the Author

Hayley was born and raised in the lake district and across Cumbria. From a young age, Hayley loved learning about history, visiting castles and discovering local stories from the past. Hayley and her partner lived in Ulverston for three years and spent her weekends walking along the Ropewalk and down by the old harbour. She became inspired by the spirit of the area and stories that had taken place along the historic streets. As a teacher, Hayley had loved the art of storytelling by studying drama and theatre. The power of the written word, how it can transport the reader to another world or even another time in history. But it wasn't until living in Ulverston did she discover a story worth telling. From that point, the characters became alive and she fell in love with the story. Find out more at Hayley's website https://hdcoulter.com/ and follow her on Facebook and Twitter @coulter_hd

19 May 2021

Historical Fiction Spotlight: The Assassins (Johnny Swift Thrillers Book 1) by Alan Bardos


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1914: Tensions are reaching boiling point in Europe and the threat of war is imminent.

Johnny Swift, a young and brash diplomatic clerk employed by the British embassy is sent to infiltrate the ‘Young Bosnians’, a group of idealistic conspirators planning to murder Franz Ferdinand. The heir to the Austro-Hungarian throne, in a bid to liberate their country from the monarchy’s grip.

Swift has been having an affair with his employer’s wife, Lady Elizabeth Smyth. Sir George Smyth dispatches the agent on the dangerous mission, believing that it will be the last he will see of his young rival.

The agent manages to infiltrate the Young Bosnian conspirators’ cell, helped by Lazlo Breitner, a Hungarian Civil Servant.

However, Swift soon realises that he may be in over his head. His gambling debts and taste for beautiful women prove the least of his problems as he struggles to survive on his wits in the increasingly complex - and perilous - world of politics and espionage.

Desperate to advance himself and with the lives of a royal couple unexpectedly in his hands, Swift tries to avert catastrophe.


Praise for Assassins:


‘A cracking read, highly recommended’ - Roger A Price

‘Written with polished panache, it kept me gripped from the first to last. Five stars from me!’ - A.A. Chaudhuri

‘Part historical fiction, part thriller and part love story, this is a compelling and entertaining read’ - Gary Haynes

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About the Author

Alan Bardos is a graduate of the MA in TV Script Writing at De Montfort University, he also has a degree in Politics and History from Brunel University. Writing historical fiction combines the first great love of his life, making up stories, with the second, researching historical events and characters. Alan currently live in Oxfordshire with his wife… the other great love of his life. Despite the amount of material that has been written about the twentieth century there is still a great deal of mystery and debate surrounding many of its events, which Alan explores in his historical fiction series using a certain amount of artistic license to fill in the gaps, while remaining historically accurate. The series will chronicle the first half of the twentieth century from the perspective of Johnny Swift, a disgraced and degenerate diplomat and soldier; starting with the pivotal event of the twentieth century, the Assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand, in ‘The Assassins’.  Follow Alan on Twitter @bardosAlan 


18 May 2021

Special Guest Post by Deborah Swift, Author of The Poison Keeper

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Naples 1633: Giulia Tofana longs for more responsibility in her mother’s apothecary business, but Mamma has always been secretive and refuses to tell her the hidden keys to her success. But the day Mamma is arrested for the poisoning of the powerful Duke de Verdi, Giulia is shocked to uncover the darker side of her trade.

Of Dowries and Betrothals in Renaissance Naples 

Marriages in Naples in the 17th Century, like most of Europe, were bound by politics and lineages. The personal preferences of the young people were of no account; the main ambition of parents was to secure a wealthy and powerful allegiance within the same, or preferably higher, social rank. 

Often marriages were brokered between parties from different places, and so prospective brides had flattering portraits or miniatures painted that could be sent with an envoy to convince future parents in law of the woman’s beauty. Beauty was a commodity then as now.


Miniatures from Museum of Warsaw

The betrothal was a legally binding contract made by the fathers of the prospective bride and groom. Weirdly, it was not necessary for the two who were to be married to take part in the signing of the agreement or even to know anything about it. It could be made when both parties were very young, even as young as four years. To break a betrothal agreement carried penalties, and often if it was to be dissolved a financial penalty would be incurred.

Before 1563, when the Council of Trent changed the process of matrimony in Church, the only requirement for marriage was the mutual consent of the man and the woman. A religious ceremony was not mandatory and no-one official needed to witness the joining together of the couple, not even a priest. Weddings however were still elaborate ritualized affairs between families, involving processions and the exchange of vows and gifts.


Grooms, too, were expected to make a present of jewellery or a fine gown for the bride to wear at the wedding. Red was a very popular colour for brides. These so called ‘gifts’ were either paid for by borrowing from the woman’s dowry, or they remained the husband’s property. Husbands were apt to sell off their wives’ wedding dresses, as once they were married they were expected to be less showy and more soberly dressed. Their job by then was to provide heirs and keep the household running.Here are the gifts of Marco Parenti to his bride, Caterina Strozzi, as reported by her mother.

‘When she was betrothed he ordered a gown of crimson velvet for her made of silk and a surcoat of the same fabric, which is the most beautiful cloth in Florence. He had it made in his workshop. And he had a hat of feathers and pearls made for her [that] cost eighty florins, the cap underneath has two strings of pearls costing sixty florins or more. When she goes out, she’ll have more than four hundred florins on her back.’

(Translation in Art and Love in Renaissance Italy, exh. cat., ed. Andrea Bayer)

These gifts listed above were paid for from her own dowry. Often at the birth of a daughter, an amount of money was deposited in a dowry fund, the monte della doti, and then the accrued interest and original sum would be paid to the husband once the marriage had been proved to be consummated. Dowries were paid by the bride’s parents, and those with daughters of marriageable age often could not afford dowries for them all. Many daughters were sent to convents, as dowries for a ‘Bride of Christ’ were, as a rule, much cheaper.

The personal clothing and jewels of the dowry would be delivered in a marriage chest or ‘cassone.’ These were often made in matching pairs for bride and groom. Early in the Renaissance these cassoni had painted decoration, often of family heraldry or biblical scenes.Inside was a different matter. 

These were designed only to be seen in the bedchamber and showed more salacious scenes of nudes, or sometimes they were painted with patterns embellished with gold like the fabrics they contained This early example shows figures linked to courtly romances, including a lovers’ tryst by the fountain of love, a lady on horseback with a falcon on 'the hunt for love'.
 

With arranged marriages often being made between very young brides and older men, the risk of the marriage being an unhappy one was great. A man might marry a girl twenty or thirty years his junior if he still had not produced an heir from previous marriages. In such circumstances, calling on someone to speed the husband’s demise doesn’t seem to outlandish, and the epidemic of poisonings in Italy showed that poison had become the woman’s weapon of choice.

Deborah Swift
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About the Author

Deborah Swift lives in North Lancashire on the edge of the Lake District and worked as a set and costume designer for theatre and TV. After gaining an MA in Creative Writing in 2007 Deborah now teach classes and courses in writing and provides editorial advice to writers and authors. Find out more at Deborah's website www.deborahswift.com and follow her on Facebook and Twitter @swiftstory

14 May 2021

Special Guest Post by Cathie Dunn, Author of The Shadows of Versailles


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Seduced at Versailles. Broken by tragedy. Consumed by revenge.

Fleur de La Fontaine attends the court of King Louis XIV at Versailles for the first time. Dazzled by the opulence, she is soon besotted with handsome courtier, Philippe de Mortain. When she believes his words of love, she gives in to his seduction – with devastating consequences.

Many thanks for inviting me to your fabulous blog today. I’m so delighted to be here, and to chat about my research for The Shadows of Versailles.

Who hasn’t heard of Versailles, the luxurious palace King Louis XIV built from a former hunting lodge?

Versailles epitomizes a glittering court, with the king at its centre. The sumptuous furnishings made from the finest woods and fabrics, often imported from as far afield as Asia; the richly-decorated ceilings, depicting the king, his family and favourites in fabled surroundings; the array of paintings of all shapes and sizes; and the sheer scale of the palace and the gardens beyond – they are all meant to dazzle, to impress. And that’s what they did.

But beneath the dazzling glamour of the new palace lay personal ambition, greed, envy, and outright jealousy. Everything revolved around the king, like the Sun he was keen to represent, pulling everything into its orbit. But his approval did not come easily. Some courtiers had to work hard to gain his favour, whilst others got it for doing little. Favouritism ruled.

Then the Affair of the Poisons revealed links to Versailles, and the king could no longer ignore it. It reverberated across Paris and the court. I’ve been fascinated by this event ever since I read Anne Golon’s riveting Angelique novels, but only after reading The Oracle Glass by Judith Merkle Riley did I begin to read up further, and I found it utterly gripping.

I have since bought a range of non-fiction books, in English and in French, to discover more about the individuals involved in these unsavoury practices ranging from obtaining potions, poisons to black masses. I found those characters self-serving and ruthlessly ambitious.

For many years, the suppliers of poisons got away with it, even though there were suspicions about deaths of magistrates and other men of good standing. I guess the very idea of people being brazen enough to poison another person seemed a little strange at first. One was not in Italy, after all.

The court was so focused on itself, and Louis’ attention was on warfare – when it was not on the vast range of entertainment activities at Versailles – that the events unfolding in Paris did not enter directly into his world. But the case of the Marquise the Brinvilliers, executed in 1676 for poisoning her father and brothers, proved that it was not only the lower classes dabbling in silly pursuits, but also people of good upbringing could be that cold-blooded.

The actual Affair of the Poisons played out mostly over the late 1670s up to 1682. For a writer of historical fiction, this opens up unlimited possibilities. It’s so inspiring, as it takes you across two fascinating but very different places – filthy-rich Versailles and poverty-stricken Paris.

That’s why, in my series about the Affair of the Poisons, I take my characters (fictional and real) back and forth. I want to highlight not only the glamorous side of the court – often shown already on TV screens and in popular fiction – but also the darker elements that were operating in Paris, in the manner in which organised crime operates these days. I love writing about the chancers and plotters, the meddling midwives, apothecaries, and alchemists.

The Shadows of Versailles is about a young girl, Fleur, who finds herself seduced by a handsome courtier and promptly falls pregnant. But when her child is taken away after birth, her thoughts slowly turn from grief to revenge. Fleur’s path takes her from the glamour of Versailles, to a brothel in Paris run by a good-hearted woman where she earns a living by sewing, and back to Versailles to enact her revenge.

Meanwhile Jacques, a spy for the chief of police, tries to find out what happened to her new-born boy. His search takes him across Paris, and into dangerous territory.

The second in the series, The Alchemist’s Daughter, due to be released later this summer, begins in the poor parts of Paris, but we will also revisit Versailles where we’ll meet characters from the first book again. The timelines cross over.

The sheer scope of people involved in the Affair of the Poisons over the years allows me to pursue a variety of plot ideas. Both Versailles and Paris are places full of intrigues – a paradise for a historical novelist! Add a touch of poison and murder, and you can give your characters free reign…

Thank you for hosting me today. It was a pleasure to be here.

Cathie Dunn

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About the Author

Cathie Dunn is an award-winning author of historical fiction, mystery, dual-timeline, and romance set in Scotland, England, and France. She has been published for ten years, but now all her novels are released under the banner of Ocelot Press, an author cooperative. The Shadows of Versailles is her fifth published novel, and she is currently working on the sequel, The Alchemist’s Daughter, and a dual-timeline story set in 9th-century Normandy. After many years in Scotland, Cathie now lives in the south of France. Find out more at her website www.cathiedunn.com and follow Cathie on Facebook and Twitter @cathiedunn


13 May 2021

Special Guest Post by Emma Lombard, Author of Discerning Grace (The White Sails Series Book 1)


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Discerning Grace captures the spirit of an independent woman whose feminine lens blows the ordered patriarchal decks of a 19th century tall ship to smithereens. Wilful Grace Baxter, will not marry old Lord Silverton with his salivary incontinence and dead-mouse stink. Discovering she is a pawn in an arrangement between slobbery Silverton and her calculating father, Grace is devastated when Silverton reveals his true callous nature.

Feisty Historical Heroines—Where to Find Them in History

My research for my historical romantic adventure on the high seas highlighted just how there much there is about men at sea in the history books but comparatively little about women. Certainly, records show us that women went to sea, whether with permission or not—as passengers or wives, but there is less evidence of what life was like aboard a tall ship for these women. 

Thankfully, I found some incredible resources that are a treasure trove of insights into the lives of many women at sea, drawn from newspaper articles, diaries and historical records. The personalised accounts from the women’s diaries gives so much more depth and emotion, outlining their hopes and fears as well as lamenting the loss of luxuries and comfort, than say a ship’s books recorded by a male clerk, which while brimming with factual information, is devoid of those personal encounters and inner thoughts.

Some of my favourite resources that reference women at sea include:

Seafaring Women by renowned historian, Linda Grant De Pauw

Female Tars by Suzanne J. Stark

Hen Frigates by maritime historian, Joan Durett

She Captains by maritime historian, Joan Durett

Modern Expectations vs Historical Reality

Any doubt I had about my fictional main character, Grace Baxter, being too modern and breaching the class or gender expectations of the time was securely put to bed by Elizabeth Gaskell’s series North and South. Here is a female author who published her works in 1854 with a recurring theme of complex social conflicts, including an entitled female protagonist who befriends working-class characters. 

As can be expected, Gaskell’s work received scathing critical reception for going against the prevailing views of the time but it is a great source for me, as a modern author, to know that these thoughts existed back then. It has enabled me to experiment with some unconventional relationships between my characters—the likes of which is going down well with my readers.

How I Avoided the Plague of the Sea

I had to do a lot of research about living aboard a naval vessel in the 19th century. The irony is, I can't even step foot on a ship because I suffer from sea sickness! There’s no wonder this affliction was called the plague of the sea. Ugh! However, I’ve managed to explore a few ship museums around the world. It has been fabulous to immerse myself in shipboard life, even if they aren’t quite of the era in which I’m writing.

Ship’s Museums I’ve Visited

Polly Woodside — three-masted barque permanently docked in Melbourne, Australia

Royal Yacht Britannia — Her Majesty The Queen’s former floating palace permanently docked in Edinburgh, Scotland

The Notorious — a travelling 15th century Portuguese Caravel replica that sailed into my hometown in Brisbane, Australia

A Captain’s Kingdom

While most Royal Navy captains commanded their ships under the governance of the Articles of War, there are plenty of tales of wayward commanders who either abused the punishments or were indifferent to complying with the regulations. Hollywood has also stretched these stereotypes rather far too. Though, let’s face it, once out on the open ocean for years at a time, a ship was the captain’s kingdom to command as he pleased. 

My research gave me a flavour of the dress, etiquette, food and expectations of shipboard life, which helped me thread this authenticity into my works—like discovering what rhea (large ostrich-like bird of South America) tasted like for the crew aboard my ship. For the record, it apparently tastes similar to young beef/veal.

Toning Down the Hollywood Drama

Interestingly enough, there were several scenes that I wrote based on factual events or characters that today’s modern audience (aka my beta readers and my editor) found implausible. So, I had to find that sweet spot between toning down some of the more colourful events and keeping the plot going, while still maintaining the historical flavour. I’m fortunate that one of my beta readers is lieutenant commander currently serving in the Royal Navy, who also happens to be a historian. Grahame’s fount of knowledge about shipboard life helped me iron out some of the Hollywood drama from my story.

As a historical fiction writer, you want to ensure you get the facts straight but sometimes there comes a point in your story where creative licence kicks in and certain events have to go a certain way to keep your readers engaged and entertained. Sorry, G! 

Ultimately, my goal as an author is to have my readers slam shut my book when they’re done and toss it beside them on the couch with a satisfied, “Ha! That was great!” 

If they’ve been entertained for the duration of reading my book and been able to escape for just a while, then mission accomplished.

Emma Lombard 

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About the Author

Emma Lombard was born in Pontefract in the UK. She grew up in Africa—calling Zimbabwe and South Africa home for a few years—before finally settling in Brisbane Australia, and raising four boys. Before she started writing historical fiction, she was a freelance editor in the corporate world, which was definitely not half as exciting as writing rollicking romantic adventures. Her characters are fearless seafarers, even though in real life Emma gets disastrously sea sick. Discerning Grace, is the first book in The White Sails Series. Find out more ar Emma's website www.emmalombardauthor.com and find her on Facebook and Twitter @LombardEmma