Mastodon The Writing Desk: July 2024

30 July 2024

Book Launch Spotlight: Memories of the Lost , by Barbara O'Neal


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An unsuspecting artist uncovers her late mother’s secrets and unravels her own hidden past in a beguiling novel by the USA Today bestselling author of When We Believed in Mermaids.

Months after her mother passes away, artist Tillie Morrisey sees a painting in a gallery that leaves her inexplicably lightheaded and unsteady. When a handsome stranger comes to her aid, their connection is so immediate it seems fated, though Liam is only visiting for a few days.

Working on her own art has always been a refuge, but after discovering a document among her mother’s belongings that suggests Tillie’s life has been a lie, she begins to suffer from a series of fugue states, with memories surfacing that she isn’t even sure are her own. 

As her confusion and grief mount, and prompted by a lead on the painting that started it all, Tillie heads to a seaside village in England. There, she hopes to discover the source of her uncanny inspirations, sort out her feelings about Liam, and unravel truths that her mother kept hidden for decades.

The fluidity of memory, empowering strength of character, beauty of nature, and love of family braid together in this artful tapestry of a novel.

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About the Author

Barbara O’Neal is the author of more than a dozen award-winning, bestselling novels, including the runaway bestseller, When We Believed in Mermaids, which has been published in more than 20 countries and spent many months on the Amazon Charts, as well as the Wall Street Journal, USA Today, and Washington Post bestseller lists. Barbara lives on the beach in rugged Oregon with her husband, a British endurance athlete who vows he’ll never lose his accent and their zoo of cats and dogs. You can find more  at barbaraoneal.com and find Barbara on Facebook

Special Guest Post by Helene Harrison, Author of Tudor Executions: From Nobility to the Block


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and for pre-order from Amazon US

The Tudors as a dynasty executed many people, both high and low. But the nobility were the ones consistently involved in treason, either deliberately or unconsciously. Exploring the long sixteenth century under each of the Tudor monarchs gives a sense of how and why so many were executed for what was considered the worst possible crime and how the definition of treason changed over the period. This book examines how and why Tudor nobles like Edward Stafford, 3rd Duke of Buckingham; Queen Consort Anne Boleyn; Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey; and Robert Devereux, 2nd Earl of Essex, fell into the trap of treason and ended up on the block under the executioner’s axe. Treason and the Tudor nobility seem to go hand in hand as, by the end of the sixteenth century and the advent of the Stuart dynasty, no dukes remained in England. How did this happen and why?

Hi Tony, thanks for having me! I’m going to talk about some of the perhaps unknown or unexplored connections between different Tudor nobles who were executed, from my new book ‘Tudor Executions: From Nobility to the Block’. 

The idea for the book came from the fact I discovered when doing some reading that there were no dukes left in England by the end of Tudor period. Elizabeth I executed Thomas Howard, 4th Duke of Norfolk, in 1572, and there wasn’t another duke created until James I created George Villiers the duke of Buckingham in 1623. That’s a 51-year period with no dukes in England and I wondered why and how that happened.


Thomas Howard, 4th Duke of Norfolk

I started to write about the first execution in the book, which is that of Edward Plantagenet, 17th Earl of Warwick, who was executed on 28 November 1499 on the orders of Henry VII. I then realised that his is part of the story of a royal Yorkist brother and sister executed by a royal Tudor father and son. Warwick’s sister was Margaret Pole, Countess of Salisbury, who was executed by Henry VIII on 27 May 1541. 

The Earl of Warwick and Margaret Pole were the children of George Plantagenet, 1st Duke of Clarence, and Isabel Neville, and thus were niece and nephew of Edward IV and Richard III. The Tudors were still relatively new on the throne in 1509 when Henry VIII succeeded his father. Henry VIII understood that he needed a son to succeed him to protect the Tudor line, otherwise there was a real threat that the Wars of the Roses could resume. Warwick and Margaret Pole were victims of the Tudors wiping out anyone else with a claim to the throne, and they were seen as part of the Yorkist White Rose group.

These weren’t the only siblings to be executed by the Tudors – others include Anne and George Boleyn, and Edward and Thomas Seymour. The Seymour brothers were executed by a Tudor king who was also their nephew, Edward VI. Jane Seymour was the third wife of Henry VIII, who married the king just eleven days after the execution of his second wife, Anne Boleyn, in May 1536. She gave birth to the son and heir Henry was desperate for in October 1537 but died days later. She was the only of Henry VIII’s six wives to have a royal burial. 

When Edward Seymour was created Duke of Somerset and Lord Protector when Edward VI came to the throne, Thomas Seymour was made Lord Admiral and Baron Seymour of Sudeley. Thomas Seymour became jealous and tried to kidnap the king, executed in 1549 on the authority of his nephew and brother. Edward Seymour, Duke of Somerset, was weakened by his brother’s execution, and was stripped of the office of Lord Protector and sent to the Tower, but then was released and restored to the Privy Council, before he was accused of plotting against the Duke of Northumberland. This time, he did not survive and was executed in 1552.


Edward Seymour, Duke of Somerset

The Howard family seem to have been particularly prone to execution and accusations of treason in the Tudor period. The first executions were in May 1536 when Anne and George Boleyn, niece and nephew to Thomas Howard, 3rd Duke of Norfolk, were executed on charges of adultery, incest, and treason. 

We know Anne Boleyn best as the second wife of Henry VIII. Further executions followed in February 1542 when Katherine Howard, another niece of the 3rd Duke of Norfolk and cousin to Anne Boleyn, as well as fifth wife of Henry VIII, was executed for adultery. Jane Boleyn, widow of George Boleyn, was also executed at this time. So far, that’s two nieces, a nephew, and a niece-by-marriage of the 3rd Duke of Norfolk executed within six years. 

The 3rd Duke of Norfolk himself narrowly avoided execution in January 1547, saved only by the death of Henry VIII. However, his son wasn’t so lucky and Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey, was executed in January 1547 days before the king’s death. The final Howard execution was in 1572 when Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey’s, son, Thomas Howard, 4th Duke of Norfolk, was executed for involvement in a plot to rescue Mary Queen of Scots, known as the Ridolfi Plot. Within 36 years, Thomas Howard, 3rd Duke of Norfolk, one of the great survivors of the Tudor age, lost two nieces who were both Queens of England, a nephew, a niece-by-marriage, a son, and a grandson to the executioner.

Many of the nobility were interconnected through marriage in the Tudor period, but there were many siblings, and whole family groups who were wiped out by the Tudor monarchs, ending some of the most influential titles of the period, including the dukedoms of Buckingham (1521), Somerset (1552), Northumberland (1553), Suffolk (1554), and Norfolk (1572). These families all had royal ties in one way or another and it was this link, and their focus on the succession, that ultimately resulted in their downfalls. The Tudors did not feel safe on their throne, and there were several families with claims on the throne, quite probably better claims than the Tudors in several cases. This fear resulted in them wiping out the most prominent people and families in England.

Helene Harrison

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About the Author

Helene Harrison studied at the University of Northumbria in Newcastle, achieving both a BA and an MA in History before going on to complete an MSc in Library Management. Her passion for Tudor history started when studying for A Levels and completing a module on Tudor rebellions. Her Masters dissertation focused on portrayals of Anne Boleyn through the centuries, from contemporary letters to modern TV and film adaptations. Now she writes two blogs, one Tudor history and one book-related, and loves visiting royal palaces and snuggling up with a book or embroidery project. Find out more at her website https://tudorblogger.com/ and find Helene on Facebook and Twitter @tudorblogger

28 July 2024

Blog Tour: The Green Viper (The James Ryker Series Book 4) by Rob Sinclair


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I need your help. Call me. Ex-intelligence agent James Ryker receives a coded message through a secret drop point, a means of communication known only to him and one other person. The problem is, that other person is his ex-boss, Mackie... and he’s already dead.

But the cry for help is real, and it’s a request Ryker can’t refuse.

Travelling to New York alone and without official sanction, Ryker has a single goal in mind, yet even he couldn’t have bargained for the violent world he’s soon embroiled in. Caught in the middle of a spiralling chaos with the FBI on one side, and two warring underworld bosses on the other, Ryker must put all of his skills to the test in order to come out on top, and keep his word.

In a world full of lies and deceit, loyalty is everything, and it’s time for James Ryker to pay his dues.

A fast-paced thriller filled with twists, turns, and intrigue that will grip fans of Mark Dawson and the Jason Bourne novels.

Praise for Rob Sinclair:

'A real page-turner, impossible to put down' Publishers Weekly

'An adrenaline shot right to the heart' The Best Thriller Books

'Action-packed, fast-paced, thrilling with many plot twists'

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About the Author

Rob Sinclair is the million copy bestseller of over twenty thrillers, including the James Ryker series. Rob previously studied Biochemistry at Nottingham University. He also worked for a global accounting firm for 13 years, specialising in global fraud investigations. Find out more from Rob's website https://www.robsinclairauthor.com/ and find him in Facebook and Twitter: @RSinclairAuthor

24 July 2024

Blog Tour Spotlight: Her Own War (Château de Verzat Series) by Debra Borchert


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As Napoleon rises from the ashes of the French Revolution, one woman dares to spy against him.

Imprisoned for the crime of impersonating a man, Geneviève LaGarde fears giving birth in an asylum could be certain death for her and her unborn child. Desperate for her release, her husband, Louis, trades his freedom for hers and must join Bonaparte’s army in Egypt.

As Geneviève wages her own war against the tyrannical general, she not only risks her own life but also those of her children and the four hundred families who depend on the Château de Verzat estate. Knowing her desperate actions could cause the government to confiscate the entire vineyard, she sacrifices everything to save her husband and protect the people who become her family. A captivating tale of the power of love, hope, and courage, and the strength of community.

“A compelling story of love, war, and fierce family loyalty."

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About the Author

Debra Borchert has had many careers: clothing designer, actress, TV show host, spokesperson for high-tech companies, marketing and public relations professional, and technical writer for Fortune 100 companies. Her work has appeared in The New York Times, San Francisco Chronicle, The Christian Science Monitor, and The Writer, among others. Her short stories have been published in anthologies and independently.  A graduate of the Fashion Institute of Technology, she weaves her knowledge of textiles and clothing design throughout her historical French fiction. She has been honored with a Historical Novel Society Editors’ Choice, Publishers Weekly BookLife Editor’s Pick, and many other five-star reviews. Find out more from her website: https://debraborchert.com/  anf fnd Debra on Facebook and Twitter: @debraborchert

23 July 2024

Anne Neville: Queen and Wife of Richard III, by Rebecca Batley


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and pre-order from Amazon US

Daughter, Wife, Princess, Widow and Queen: Anne Neville had many faces.

Shakespeare presents her to us as a woman consumed with rage, bitterness and grief. He has her cursing the killer of her husband and father, before marrying him and condemning herself to despair. She rages, screams and weeps but ultimately she is shown as nothing more than a passive victim of the men who used and exploited her.

This could not be further from the truth. Born into one of the most powerful dynasties in medieval England, Anne knew her worth, and her power. She was a great survivor escaping the tide of blood that consumed England not just alive but emerging with a crown on her head.

Tragedy would untimely engulf her, the death of her son ended all her hopes for a lasting legacy and her premature death was subject to rumour and speculation. But there is undoubtedly more to Anne than her marriage and her end.

She is fascinating, elusive, a powerbroker and very much her father’s daughter.

This is Anne’s story.

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About the Author

Rebecca Batley is an archaeologist and historian, with a particular interest in women's history. Her work can be found in numerous publications including "New Scientist, Gay and Lesbian Review" and "AHM". She regularly writes for "Ancient Origins" and has worked for, amongst others, MOLA and Wessex Archaeology.  Find out more from https://thetravellinghistorianclub.wordpress.com and find Rebecca on Instagram

22 July 2024

Historical Fiction Spotlight: Becoming the Twilight Empress: A Theodosian Women Novella by Faith L. Justice


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In a tumultuous time of violence, betrayal, and ruthless evil, can one charismatic young woman survive the bloodshed?

Ravenna, A.D. 408. Placidia is watching her family fall apart. When her emperor brother accuses their powerful foster father of treason, the naive imperial princess tries to reason with her sibling to no avail. And after her foster father is lured out of sanctuary and brutally executed, she flees the toxic court to avoid a forced marriage… but to dubious safety.

Braving increasing peril on her journey to Rome, Placidia barely survives impassable swamps, imperial assassins, and bands of barbarians. When the Goths besiege Rome and a starving populace threaten civil disorder, the daughter of Theodosius the Great must navigate fraught politics to become a vigilant leader… or face an early death.

Can she rise above an empire descending into chaos?

Becoming the Twilight Empress is the breathtaking prequel to the Theodosian Women biographical historical fiction series. If you like tenacious heroines, vivid settings, and nail-biting drama, then you’ll love Faith L. Justice’s captivating coming-of-age adventure.

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About the Author

Faith L. Justice writes award-winning historical novels, short stories, and articles in Brooklyn, New York where she lives with her family and the requisite gaggle of cats. Her work has appeared in Salon.com, Writer’s Digest, The Copperfield Review, and many more publications. She is Chair of the New York City chapter of the Historical Novel Society, and Associate Editor for Space and Time Magazine. She co-founded a writer’s workshop many more years ago than she likes to admit. For fun, she digs in the dirt—her garden and various archaeological sites. Find out more at Dawn's w
ebsite: https://faithljustice.com and find her on Facebook and Twitter @faithljustice


21 July 2024

Historical Fiction Spotlight: A Song of Courage: A gripping WW2 historical novel based on a true story, by Rachel Wesson


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This unforgettable novel is based on the incredible true story of two unsung heroines who risked everything to save countless lives in the lead-up to WW2.

Connie Fitzwalter never imagined that her passion for music would lead her into a world of danger and intrigue. When her old family friend Stephen, who works for the foreign office, tells her the true scale of the violence in Germany and Austria, she can stand aside no longer. Together they devise a daring and perilous mission to help innocent people escape the clutches of Nazi persecution.

Under their cover as music enthusiasts travelling to high-society concerts in Europe, Connie and her sister Dottie begin helping desperate families escape to safety into England. As the sisters travel into the heart of Nazi Germany, defying the border guards, patrols and Gestapo agents takes every ounce of courage they have.

One misstep, one whisper of suspicion, and they could lose everything—their freedom, their futures, and even each other.

A Song of Courage is a testament to the unbreakable bond of sisterhood and the strength of the human spirit  based on the real-life story of the Mills & Boon novelist Mary Burchell/Ida Cook and her sister Louise Cook.

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About the Author

Rachel Wesson was born in Kilkenny, Ireland but considers herself to be from the capital, Dublin as that’s where she spent most of her life. She grew up driving everyone nuts asking them questions about what they did during the War or what side they were on in the 1916 rising etc. Finally her Granny told her to write her stories down so people would get the pleasure of reading them. In fact what Granny meant was everyone would get some peace while Rachel was busy writing!  When not writing, or annoying relatives, Rachel was reading. Her report cards from school commented on her love of reading especially when she should have been learning. Seems you can't read Great Expectations in Maths.  Rachel lives in Surrey with her husband and three children, two boys and a girl. Find out more from Rachel's website https://rachelwesson.com/ and find her on Twitter @wessonwrites

19 July 2024

The Lucy Lawrence Mystery Series, by Pam Lecky


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The Lucy Lawrence Mystery Series

When No Stone Unturned was published back in 2019, I couldn't have predicted the series' popularity. Now, so many years later, the series has found a new home with Storm Publishing and, hopefully, lots of new readers will discover Lucy and Phin’s adventures.
Having devoured historical fiction and crime since my teens, it was inevitable that I would write books combining mystery, crime and a sprinkle of romance. Initially, Lucy Lawrence was only supposed to be a supporting character in Phineas Stone’s world. But her voice grew in strength to the point I had to rewrite the entire book from her point of view… And the Lucy mysteries were born!
 
Depending on their class, women in the Victorian era faced strict rules and lived a highly restricted life. I wanted to explore how a young woman, with a strong personality and high intelligence (but poorly educated - parents bothered little if you weren’t the heir), would cope within the confines of a troubled marriage. Would she accept her lot or chafe at the bit? 

But in Lucy’s case, with no money and estranged from her family, she could not walk away. Doing so would result in social ruin. However, when circumstances finally release her (her husband’s sudden death), she struggles to find her way. Almost every man in her life so far has betrayed her on some level for their own ends. As a result, Lucy finds it difficult to trust her fate to any man.

There is a pivotal point in No Stone Unturned when Lucy realises she must take her destiny into her own hands and she sets out on a dangerous adventure in pursuit of the truth about her late husband and his less than legal activities.
 
Another theme, which emerged as I explored Lucy’s story, was the strong reliance on female friendship. I suspect this is what sustained many Victorian women, finding themselves in similar circumstances to Lucy. As the plot unfolds, Lucy comes to rely more and more on her maid, Mary, who also begins to shine with talents hitherto unknown, namely a penchant for spying and intrigue. And when trouble does strike, it is often her friends, Judith and Sarah, Lucy turns to.

Combining my two great loves - Victorian adventure with a feisty heroine and ancient Egypt - the second book in the series, Footprints in the Sand, will resonate with me the longest. My research included Amelia Edwards’ book, A Thousand Miles Up The Nile (1873). I cannot deny that the Egypt described presented countless possibilities for mischief to a mystery writer. 
Her descriptions of Cairo and the many sites she visited transported me back to Victorian Egypt like none of the other dry contemporary source did. My heroine shared some of Miss Edwards' qualities of curiosity and determination and so Footprints in the Sand quickly transformed from a vague plot idea to a novel.

In the third book of the series, The Art of Deception, Lucy is back in London. You might think she is about to settle down, but, of course, that would be no fun at all. And as Lucy admits to Phineas, trouble seems to follow her. However, when Lucy’s ‘help’ in an art theft case triggers a murder and Phineas becomes the chief suspect, Lucy must use her wits to save him.

The fourth book in the series, A Pocketful of Diamonds, is a brand new murder mystery, set on beautiful Lake Como in Italy. It is slated for release by Storm Publishing in September 2024 and will be available for preorder very soon.
Pam Lecky

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About the Author

Pam Lecky
 is an Irish historical fiction author with Avon Books UK/Harper Collins. She is a member of the Historical Novel Society, The Crime Writers' Association, and the Society of Authors. She is represented by Thérèse Coen, at the Hardman & Swainson Literary Agency, London. Pam has a particular love of the late Victorian era/early 20th Century. Her debut novel, The Bowes Inheritance, was awarded the B.R.A.G Medallion; shortlisted for the Carousel Aware Prize 2016; and longlisted for the Historical Novel Society 2016 Indie Award. Her short stories are available in an anthology, entitled Past Imperfect, which was published in April 2018.  Find out more at Pam's website https://pamlecky.com/ and find her on Twitter @pamlecky

18 July 2024

Book Launch Blog Tour: The Lost Queen, by Carol McGrath


Available from Amazon UK and Amazon US

The Lost Queen is a thrilling medieval story of high adventure, survival, friendship and the enduring love of a Queen for her King.


It is 1191 and King Richard the Lionheart is on crusade to pitch battle against Saladin and liberate the city of Jerusalem and her lands. His mother, the formidable Eleanor of Aquitaine and his promised bride, Princess Berengaria of Navarre, make a perilous journey over the Alps in midwinter. They are to rendezvous with Richard in the Sicilian port of Messina.

There are hazards along the way - vicious assassins, marauding pirates, violent storms and a shipwreck. Berengaria is as feisty as her foes and, surviving it all, she and Richard marry in Cyprus and continue to the Holy Land. England needs an heir. But first, Richard and his Queen must return home . . .

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About the Author

Following a first degree in English and History, Carol McGrath completed an MA in Creative Writing from The Seamus Heaney Centre, Queens University Belfast, followed by an MPhil in English from University of London. The Handfasted Wife, first in a trilogy about the royal women of 1066 was shortlisted for the RoNAS in 2014. The Swan-Daughter and The Betrothed Sister complete this highly acclaimed trilogy. Mistress Cromwell, a best-selling historical novel about Elizabeth Cromwell, wife of Henry VIII’s statesman, Thomas Cromwell, was republished by Headline in 2020. The Silken Rose, first in a medieval She-Wolf Queens Trilogy, featuring Ailenor of Provence, saw publication in April 2020. This was followed by The Damask Rose. The Stone Rose was published April 2022. Carol lives in Oxfordshire, England and in Greece.  Find our more from Carol's website: www.carolcmcgrath.co.uk and find her on Facebook and Twitter @CarolMcGrath

16 July 2024

Blog Tour Spotlight: The Agincourt King (The Plantagenet Legacy Book 5) by Mercedes Rochelle


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From the day he was crowned, Henry V was determined to prove the legitimacy of his house. His father's usurpation weighed heavily on his mind. Only a grand gesture would capture the respect of his own countrymen and the rest of Europe. He would follow in his great-grandfather Edward III's footsteps, and recover lost territory in France.

Better yet, why not go for the crown? Poor, deranged Charles VI couldn't manage his own barons. The civil war between the Burgundians and Armagnacs was more of a threat to his country than the English, even after Henry laid siege to Harfleur. But once Harfleur had fallen, the French came to their senses and determined to block his path to Calais and destroy him.

By the time the English reached Agincourt, they were starving, exhausted, and easy pickings. Or so the French thought. Little did they reckon on Henry's leadership and the stout-hearted English archers who proved, once again, that numbers didn't matter when God was on their side.

"A lavish depiction of one of the most famous battles in English history, which was won by one of England's most beloved kings."

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About the Author

Mercedes Rochelle is an ardent lover of medieval history, and has channeled this interest into fiction writing. She believes that good Historical Fiction, or Faction as it’s coming to be known, is an excellent way to introduce the subject to curious readers. She also writes a blog: HistoricalBritainBlog.com to explore the history behind the story.  Born in St. Louis, MO, she received by BA in Literature at the Univ. of Missouri St.Louis in 1979 then moved to New York in 1982 while in her mid-20s to “see the world”. The search hasn’t ended! Today she lives in Sergeantsville, NJ with her husband in a log home they had built themselves. Find out more at her website https://mercedesrochelle.com/ and find her on Facebook and Twitter @authorrochelle

15 July 2024

Three Bridgerton Historical Inaccuracies that "Work" for the Plot — and One That Doesn’t, by Savannah Cordova



Whether you love it or hate it, you can’t deny that Netflix’s TV adaptation of Julia Quinn’s Bridgerton book series has been the talk of the ton on several occasions, especially with the recent release of its third season.

While the series doesn’t always provide the most historically accurate portrayal of England in the Regency era, I’ve found that this can sometimes work in favor of the plot. So in this post, dear reader, let’s look at some Bridgerton inaccuracies we could arguably forgive — as well as one issue that this author believes should’ve been paid more attention to in the writers’ room.

In favor of the plot

1. Names in Lady Whistledown’s scandal sheets

Scandal sheets did exist during the time of Bridgerton — apparently, even high society back then couldn’t resist slander and rumors! Gossip columns in real life, however, notably didn’t mention the full names of members of the ton due to libel laws. That said, the initials of any subjects of gossip were sometimes included, and anyone who was in the know could easily discern who was being written about.

In Bridgerton, however, Lady Whistledown is not afraid to go ahead and publish the names of everyone who has spurned her. Perhaps libel laws don’t exist in the show’s alternate version of Regency-era England? Regardless, for the sake of moving the plot along, it’s important that Lady Whistledown cuts right to the chase and avoids relying on initials or other vague identifiers when penning her scandal sheets.

For more efficient storytelling, it becomes quickly clear to whom the anonymous gossip columnist is referring. That way, instead of the show turning into an Agatha Christie-inspired mystery where we watch members of the ton spend days — even weeks — debating over the possible subjects of scandal, they can devote their screen time to more entertaining matters.

2. The pairing of a Bridgerton with a prince

While the Bridgerton family never existed in real life, Netflix’s popular series does include several characters based on actual people, such as Prince Friedrich. The royal, who appears in three episodes of Season 1, is portrayed onscreen as the nephew of Queen Charlotte. While visiting London for the season, he gets roped into one of his aunt’s matchmaking schemes.

In real life, Queen Charlotte of Mecklenburg-Strelitz did have a distant nephew known as Prince Friedrich Wilhelm Ludwig of Prussia. However, unlike Bridgerton suggests, Friedrich did not fall for a viscount’s daughter like Daphne Bridgerton. Instead, he purportedly expressed interest in Princess Charlotte of Wales: the daughter of George IV and Caroline of Brunswick (so many royals, so little time). Despite this, he ended up marrying Princess Louise of Anhalt-Bernburg for political reasons.

Although Friedrich’s portrayal in Bridgerton isn’t completely accurate, it’s undeniable that his presence was key to the plot of Season 1. When Simon Basset (aka the Duke of Hastings) notices how much attention Friedrich — a worthy rival — has been paying to Daphne, he takes action and makes his true feelings for her known.

This wouldn’t have been as effective if Friedrich had simply been a regular member of the ton, given that Simon is already a cut above as a duke. It’s unlikely that Queen Charlotte would have encouraged her nephew to court someone who isn’t of royal blood in real life, but thankfully, Bridgerton disregards this minor fact for the sake of the plot.

3. The absence of chaperones

The first season of Bridgerton often highlights the importance of a chaperone whenever single men and women are in each other’s company. These women had to keep their reputations flawless, lest they face persecution from society and lose all hope of securing suitable matches. 

However, the third season in particular throws several rules of propriety out the window, with Penelope and Colin meeting often to chat — without any other person in the vicinity! 

While this wouldn’t have been allowed in real life, it’s pretty imperative in Season 3 of Bridgerton; after all, you wouldn’t dare to hold a flirting lesson in the presence of a relative or your maid, would you? The private conversations between Penelope and Colin are crucial to progressing Season 3, serving to both deepen their bond and help Colin realize Penelope is indeed the love of his life.

It’s safe to say that historical fiction authors and showrunners need to take some creative license in order to appeal to a contemporary audience, but it can be a fine line to balance. So what about when it doesn’t work?

Against the plot

Despite being one of Netflix’s most popular series of all time, Bridgerton is not immune to heavy criticism. One of the most recent, glaring issues would have to be Season 3’s unforgivable inclusion of just a few too many modern elements.

Given that Bridgerton is set in England in the 1810s, the dialogue of our most esteemed characters should reflect the time period in which they live. However, certain moments have caused this author to raise a perfectly arched eyebrow.

For example, instead of declaring her affection for Colin Bridgerton in a poetic manner, Penelope Featherington resorts to a modern type of confession: “I have feelings for you.” Other characters are not exempt from this — Penelope’s sisters, Prudence and Philippa, often say “pregnant” instead of “with child,” the former being considered much less polite by formal society in the early 1800s.

One could argue that this reflects the crudeness of their characters, but it stands out as just a little too anachronistic in this context. Even Lady Danbury has uttered at least one phrase inspired by popular sayings in this day and age (“Don’t come for my cane,” anyone?). And while these meme-worthy moments can certainly be fun, the repeated usage in Season 3 is more distracting than diverting.

Another major anachronism: eagle-eyed viewers have pointed out that Penelope wears acrylic nails throughout the latest season of Bridgerton. While their origins have been disputed, many historians believe that an American dentist named Dr. Fred Slack created them to fix a broken nail at work in the 1950s — over a century after Bridgerton takes place. In addition to acrylic nails, characters such as Penelope and Francesca Bridgerton can also be seen with more contemporary cosmetic inventions, such as smoky eyeshadow and false eyelashes.

Bridgerton may be historical fiction, but its viewers’ suspension of disbelief can only go so far. When too many modern elements are incorporated into a period drama, this reminds engrossed audience members that they are watching something fictional, which can lead to a jarring experience and create a sense of distance.

These viewers may also end up feeling upset with the series, its showrunners, and its writers, asking questions such as: Did they do enough research for this show? Did they take enough time and effort to work on this season, or is this just lazy writing (or an unfortunate oversight)?

If you have been inspired by Bridgerton and are considering penning your own historical fiction, you have artistic license to add certain details that may not be 100% authentic. However, dear reader, take heed and remember to ensure that any inaccuracies you include will enhance — not detract from — your story. Happy writing!

Savannah Cordova

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About the Author
 
Savannah Cordova is a writer with Reedsy, a marketplace that connects authors with publishing professionals to help them edit, design, and market their books. In her spare time, Savannah enjoys reading and writing short stories. Naturally, she’s a big fan of historical fiction — when it’s done right. Find out more at reedsy.com and on X @ReedsyHQ.

14 July 2024

Book Review: Everyday Life in Tudor London: Life in the City of Thomas Cromwell, William Shakespeare & Anne Boleyn, by Stephen Porter


Available from Amazon UK and Amazon US
(UK Paperback 15 Aug. 2024)

First published in 2016, this book brings together much of the work on Tudor London by the late historian and author Stephen Porter. Best known for his work on the many outbreaks of plague and the sweating sickness which made the city such a dangerous place,  Everyday Life in Tudor London looks at the roles of churches, trade and recreation.

Despite the famous names of the title, Stephen Porter's focus is more in terms of ordinary Londoners, and he paints a vivid picture of merchants in bustling marketplaces and theatergoers flocking to the Bankside to enjoy Elizabethan drama.


I recommend this book as a valuable resource for anyone interested in the Tudor period, and Stephen Porter's engaging writing style is aimed at a wide audience, from those with little knowledge to dedicated scholars. If you're looking to step back in time and explore the dynamic world of Tudor London, this book is an excellent place to start.

Tony Riches

13 July 2024

Blog Tour: Courage of the Conquered (Quest for New England Book 3) by Anna Chant


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An epic voyage concludes…

All the wonders of the Mediterranean have not prepared the English for the splendours of Constantinople. As Siward of Gloucester settles into the city, he is grateful to have finally found what he was looking for: A fine god-fearing lord he is proud to serve and a safe place where he and Oswyth can await the birth of their child.

But as the months pass, doubts creep in. Emperor Michael proves to be a weak ruler, continually threatened with rebellion. Determined to keep the English army close to him, his promises of reward grow increasingly vague.

With the tension in Constantinople rising, Siward and his friends are caught up in the power struggle. While Bridwin maintains his loyalty to the Emperor and Siward continues to trust in the friendship of the cunning Alexios Komnenos, Frebern grows close to John Bryennios, a man whose ambitions may include the imperial throne itself. With the friends drawn in different directions, Siward fears they could find themselves fighting on opposing sides.

Desperate to escape, he renews his efforts to find the home the English have so long craved. But the beauty of Constantinople conceals dangers that go far beyond Siward’s fears as sordid secrets and ruthless betrayal stalk the lives of those he holds dear.

As the English prepare for battle yet again, will Siward’s quest for New England end in heart-breaking tragedy?
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About the Author

Anna Chant grew up in Essex, with her first home a tiny medieval cottage. Aged 18 she moved to Yorkshire to study history at the University of Sheffield. In 2015, inspired by her love of medieval history and her Scottish ancestry, Anna started writing her first book with Kenneth’s Queen, the tale of the unknown wife of Kenneth Mac Alpin, published the following year. Taking inspiration from both history and legend, she particularly enjoys bringing to life the lesser known people, events and folklore of the past. When not writing, Anna enjoys walking the coast and countryside of Devon where she lives with her husband, three sons (if they’re home) and a rather cheeky bearded dragon. Find out more from Anna's website https://darkagevoices.wordpress.com/ and follow her on Facebook and Twitter @anna_chant

12 July 2024

Special Guest Interview with Neal Rabin, Author of FLAT: A voyage of accidental discovery


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A swashbuckling adventure, teeming with betrayal, romance, murder, sea battles. Between the final breath of the Spanish Inquisition, and Magellan's epic voyage, join unintended explorer, Lanning Delaford, plus an eclectic cast of characters as they traverse southern Europe
onto the unknown Great Sea.

I'm pleased to welcome author Neal Rabin to The Writing Desk

Tell us about your latest book

FLAT is a seafaring tale about a man’s search for self and how each of the characters confronts the challenges of their own fears. 

How do we deal with our fears? When we are confronted with the unknown, or unexpected edges of our lives do we stop at that metaphorical edge, or take the next step forward? How do we navigate the chaos in life, politics, social structures, religion, and beyond?  These are the main themes I wrapped inside the rapid fire, 16th century swashbuckling adventure tale that is Flat. Also — pirates!

1519 in the south of Spain was a time of upheaval and transition. Not limited to the shape of the planet – flat or sphere – the world had a long list of unknowns to contend with for every level of society. Centering in the age of exploration gave me a bountiful palette for weaving both a fast-paced tale, and the chance to explore some of the deeper questions about the nature of our humanity.

The story is wedged in between the tail end of the Spanish Inquisition and Magellan’s epic voyage of discovery. As mentioned, there are pirates, royals, an eclectic cast of characters, heaps of satire, all mixed in with betrayal, romance, and murder. Philosophical exploration can definitely be riveting entertainment!

What is your preferred writing routine?

My goal is based not on word count, but on desk time. I show up every day. Facing the blank page is always the toughest part of the process. I commit to sitting at my desk for at least two hours a day when starting something new. I often surpass that goal, but it is vital to feel successful each day. You may not have written like Mozart, but you have written! 

Relying on some arbitrary word count, for me, creates far too much pressure and only ends up generating piles of terrible, incoherent chopped word salad.  With my previous novel, 23 Degrees South, I wrote exclusively in the morning. FLAT turned out to demand an afternoon-early evening process. I can’t say why, I just rolled with what the book wanted. 

What advice do you have for new writers?

Recently at a book launch event I was asked about my process. From my view there are two types of writers – those who write with a map and those who prefer to use a compass! I’m a compass writer. Compass writers have a general sense of direction, but no hard and fast scaffolding. I set off in a direction and experience the journey much like the reader does; hopefully not wandering too far afield from my intended path. 

I enjoy the unknown pathway inherent in the discovery process. As it turns out, my process means I often create more material than needed to construct the fast-paced novels I prefer. In the case of FLAT, I turned in 92,000 words to my editor. The final book contains about 80,000. That’s a solid 40+ pages of extra content we sliced out and filed back in my own personal word warehouse. Maybe they will appear in some other shape or form down the road.

Neither do I worry about writer’s block, nor a dearth of ideas. I am fortunate in having the composer Philip Glass as a very old pal. He is a highly disciplined artist. We were talking about the creative process, and he offered me some sage advice. He told me, with confidence, that beneath his desk (or piano) he knows there exists a free-flowing river of abundant creativity. If he showed up at his desk each day, he would be able to tap into that stream, and so he never worried about a lack of ideas. I have adopted that mindset in my practice as well. 

For new writers, show up, be patient, persevere, and things will occur. 

Tell us something unexpected you discovered during your research

I spent a lot of time asking questions from a very generous University of Madrid history professor. I asked him mostly mundane questions – “what did folks do on a Friday night? Did they even have a ‘Friday night’? What did people wear and why? What might the job market options be for a common citizen?” He suggested tons of reading material to supplement his extensive knowledge of the era. It felt important to create the most realistic setting for the story I wanted to tell. With that as a goal I set about giving myself an intensive, months-long dive into 16th century everything! Art, literature, horseback riding, common foods, events, plus the key figures from history during that era. 

What emerged after my self-inflicted master’s course? For better, or often worse, I realized that human nature has not perceptibly changed over these many millennia. Exactly how long does behavioral evolution take for us as a species? Are we destined to constantly repeat our patterns with minimal upward traction? I had hoped for better. 

Given the premise that we haven’t changed much over time, the events of today predictably overlay seamlessly onto most events from any time period in human history including our own. 
FLAT puts fiction and fact in a blender. The book includes prominent figures that readers will easily recognize —Ferdinand Magellan and Ignatius Loyola are two examples. 

Magellan set off to prove the world was anything but flat! He had personal financial gain as a key motivation too. Expanding the trade horizons for Spain would vastly enhance his own personal wealth as well. Historical figures are not mythical beings, possessed of unique magical qualities that led them down the paths to immortality. Like all of us, they are human and subject to the fragility of the human condition.

What was the hardest scene you remember writing?

I had to write a complicated sea battle at one point – multiple ships, cannon balls, weather, etc. Not being a student of sailing, military battles, or extreme conditions on the ocean, I recall feeling incredibly daunted by the task. So, I applied something I’ve learned as a guitarist. When learning a piece of music, a particular guitar solo for example, always break the music into bite size pieces. Never try tackling the whole thing at once. 

After breaking the battle up into smaller sections, I then did the needed research on those parts before moving forward. It took several weeks to get it right. Then, of course, during subsequent drafts it morphed and evolved. I read a ton of books for research, and even watched a few old Errol Flynn films to ratchet up the cinematic scope of the novel. Every little bit helps.

What are you planning to write next?

I am currently working on some pieces for NPRs Moth radio, but that’s all I’m going to say about that for now!

Neal Rabin 

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About the Author

Neal Rabin is the co-founder of Miramar Systems, a Santa Barbara-based global software company, of which he was CEO for 15 years. Before that, Rabin graduated from UCLA; worked for Club Med as a tennis and surf instructor; stocked refrigerators; and served as a “fetch” for Time Life Films. Now, Neal is an instrument pilot who divides his time between mentoring tech start-ups, writing, surfing, volleyball, and tennis. He lives in Santa Barbara with his wife, two daughters, and a flock of chickens. Find out more from Neal's website https://nealrabin.com/

Blog Tour Review: Daughters of Tuscany, by Siobhan Daiko


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Two women, one community, everyone’s war…

Set in the Tuscan countryside, this compelling new book from Siobhan Daiko takes us into the lives of two very different women as they deal with the consequences of life in occupied Italy. Emma, the daughter of the wealthy landowner,  has a promising future ahead of her, while hard-working Rosa is already widowed by the war.

Siobhan has a talent for evocative details and developing convincingly complex relationships. Both of these women face impossible choices and must risk everything to save the people they love.  

The idyllic start soon builds as the region becomes a dangerous battlefield, and they are drawn into supporting the resistance. Impeccably researched, Daughters of Tuscany offers an insight into rarely explored events of the second world war, a story of courage and resilience which deserves to be told.

Tony Riches 

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About the Author

Siobhan Daiko is a British historical fiction author. A lover of all things Italian, she lives in the Veneto region of northern Italy with her husband, a Havanese dog and a Siberian cat. Siobhan was born of English parents in Hong Kong, attended boarding school in Australia, and then moved to the UK — where she taught modern foreign languages in a Welsh high school. She now spends her time writing page-turners and living the dolce vita sweet life near Venice. Her novels are compelling, poignant, and deeply moving, with strong characters and evocative settings, but always with romance at their heart. You can find more about her books on her website www.siobhandaiko.org and follow her on Facebook and Twitter @siobhandaiko

11 July 2024

Historical Fiction Spotlight: The Sea Witch Voyages, by Helen Hollick


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Trouble follows Captain Jesamiah Acorne like a ship’s wake...

The early 1700s: from the sun of the Caribbean to the eerie mists of England’s Exmoor in Devon, the Sea Witch Voyages follow the adventures (misadventures?) of Captain Jesamiah Acorne. Orphaned at almost fifteen Jesamiah escaped his home in Virginia and the bullying of his half-brother to join with his father’s old friend, Captain Malachias Taylor – a kindly man, but also a rogue of a pirate.

Jesamiah eventually captains his own ship, but at Cape Town, South Africa, he is to meet the girl who becomes the love of his life – Tiola Oldstagh, a midwife, healer... and a White Witch with the gift of Craft.

Accepting amnesty from Governor Woodes Rogers of Nassau, Jesamiah turns to a legal, married, life, except various governors, ex-lovers, bad-tempered pirates, lingering ghosts and other non-human entities seem to have different ideas.

Jesamiah Acorne: a swashbuckling amalgamation of Hornblower, Jack Aubrey and Jack Sparrow mixed with Indiana Jones, James Bond and Bernard Cornwell’s Richard Sharpe.

Voyage with Jesamiah aboard Sea Witch and sail into the ocean realm of fast-paced, exciting nautical adventures...

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About the Author

Helen Hollick Pendragon’s Banner Trilogy, a fifth-century version of the Arthurian legend, was accepted for traditional publication in April 1993 by William Heinemann (Random House UK) a week after her 40th birthday.  The Trilogy has been widely acclaimed since then – and gone through several different editions. Helen moved from Random House UK in 2006 and went ‘Indie’, now in 2023 to celebrate she has brought out her own fabulous new editions! (The Trilogy is published mainstream by Sourcebooks Inc in USA/Canada. The publisher was offered the new cover designs for free, but declined.) Helen became a USA Today Bestseller with her historical novel, The Forever Queen (titled A Hollow Crown in the UK) with the sequel, Harold the King (US: I Am The Chosen King) being novels that explore the events that led to the Battle of Hastings in 1066.  She writes a nautical adventure/fantasy Pirates of the Caribbean series, The Sea Witch Voyages and has also branched out into the quick read novella, 'Cosy Mystery' genre with her Jan Christopher Murder Mysteries, set in the 1970s, with the first in the series, A Mirror Murder incorporating her, often hilarious, memories of working as a library assistant. Her non-fiction books are Pirates: Truth and Tales and Life of A Smuggler. She lives with her family in an eighteenth-century farmhouse in North Devon with a variety of pets and horses. Find out more from Helen's website https://helenhollick.net and find her on Facebook and Twitter @HelenHollick